The Red Barn

The Red Barn

The red barn stands, silhouetted against the sky.
The oak tree wraps its tired limbs about her
As if to protect her from time and age.
Her roof is sagging, color faded ,
An errant plume of color along her frame.
Yet, proud she stands, remembrance of a happy time.
Shelter from the rain, chidren
Playing in her hair, lovers hiding in her shadows.
Beauty I see now, not bright, not boastful.
With dignity and respect she bows to age.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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Rose Avatar
August 10, 2021 at 5:25 AM
Quite lovely. It was very vivid to me.
Petersen Potter Avatar
November 15, 2008 at 12:38 AM
Just beautiful Barb.Love and blessings.D.
Strand Avatar
November 15, 2008 at 12:20 AM
Love the image of your last line Barbara.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments
Bickerstaffe Avatar
November 14, 2008 at 5:32 PM
So remiiscent of my poem 'Cabin.' Lovely phrasing... especially 'children playing in her hair.' Poignant, yet delightful! Best wishes, Keith
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