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The Red Barn

The Red Barn The red barn stands, silhouetted against the sky. The oak tree wraps its tired limbs about her As if to protect her from time and age. Her roof is sagging, color faded , An errant plume of color along her frame. Yet, proud she stands, remembrance of a happy time. Shelter from the rain, chidren Playing in her hair, lovers hiding in her shadows. Beauty I see now, not bright, not boastful. With dignity and respect she bows to age.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 8/10/2021 5:25:00 AM
Quite lovely. It was very vivid to me.
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Date: 11/15/2008 12:38:00 AM
Just beautiful Barb.Love and blessings.D.
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Date: 11/15/2008 12:20:00 AM
Love the image of your last line Barbara.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments
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Date: 11/14/2008 5:32:00 PM
So remiiscent of my poem 'Cabin.' Lovely phrasing... especially 'children playing in her hair.' Poignant, yet delightful! Best wishes, Keith
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