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The Reckoning

beyond the reach of human gaze and past the portal, no light strays a darkness lurks as yet unseen where spirits gather, boast and preen await the night the sea will fly and drown our thoughts that fill the sky when day returns a trembling sound heard naught by life where none is found another waits on planets far where once was but a twinkling star and points our way beyond their moon and asks if life became Earth's doom

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Date: 3/13/2022 1:57:00 AM
The reckoning is beautifully depicted. Congratulations!
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James Marshall Goff
Date: 3/13/2022 4:35:00 AM
Thanks Christuraj! (one of my favorites!)
Date: 2/26/2010 5:43:00 AM
I especially like the next to last set of couplets. Very well written. Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara
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Date: 2/24/2010 5:57:00 AM
Lovely lovely verse and an excellent example of slip or half rhyme! Hope all's well? Light & Love
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Date: 2/15/2010 6:29:00 PM
Excellent poem, James M. Goff! 1 month without a computer... how can you stand it? I'm glad you will be back, soon. Very nice poem here...Reckoning. I think that life became Earth's boon! Then man began working on the doom...scavenging the earth from every nook and cranny...until all but waste is gone. Hum, perhaps a rebirth after man's extinction. (Where in the world did all of that come from. I guess I'm tired of urban sprawl, gluttony, and greed. Your poem took me to awareness.) Smiles!
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Date: 2/14/2010 7:56:00 AM
...and points our way beyond their moon and asks if life became Earth's doom!" Really an excellent write, Jimbo! Keep your pen flowing and thank you for your cmments. Gert
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Date: 2/6/2010 3:32:00 PM
You have so improved! I used to like your poems but now my mouth just sorta drops open
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Date: 2/6/2010 1:22:00 PM
Excellent!
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Date: 2/6/2010 11:04:00 AM
James, you wrote very melodic charming lines which made me think. I read them with great pleasure & put them in my Fav Poem ) to think over them later. Have a good Sunday! Oleg
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