The Reckoning

beyond the reach of human gaze
and past the portal, no light strays

a darkness lurks as yet unseen
where spirits gather, boast and preen

await the night the sea will fly
and drown our thoughts that fill the sky

when day returns a trembling sound
heard naught by life where none is found

another waits on planets far
where once was but a twinkling star

and points our way beyond their moon
and asks if life became Earth's doom
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Alex Avatar
March 13, 2022 at 1:57 AM
The reckoning is beautifully depicted. Congratulations!
Goff Avatar
March 13, 2022 at 4:35 AM
Thanks Christuraj! (one of my favorites!)
Kendrick Avatar
February 26, 2010 at 5:43 AM
I especially like the next to last set of couplets. Very well written. Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara
Guzzi Avatar
February 24, 2010 at 5:57 AM
Lovely lovely verse and an excellent example of slip or half rhyme! Hope all's well? Light & Love
Smith-Johnsen Avatar
February 15, 2010 at 6:29 PM
Excellent poem, James M. Goff! 1 month without a computer... how can you stand it? I'm glad you will be back, soon. Very nice poem here...Reckoning. I think that life became Earth's boon! Then man began working on the doom...scavenging the earth from every nook and cranny...until all but waste is gone. Hum, perhaps a rebirth after man's extinction. (Where in the world did all of that come from. I guess I'm tired of urban sprawl, gluttony, and greed. Your poem took me to awareness.) Smiles!
Knop Avatar
February 14, 2010 at 7:56 AM
...and points our way beyond their moon and asks if life became Earth's doom!" Really an excellent write, Jimbo! Keep your pen flowing and thank you for your cmments. Gert
Ginn Avatar
February 6, 2010 at 3:32 PM
You have so improved! I used to like your poems but now my mouth just sorta drops open
Palli Avatar
February 6, 2010 at 1:22 PM
Excellent!
Borisov Avatar
February 6, 2010 at 11:04 AM
James, you wrote very melodic charming lines which made me think. I read them with great pleasure & put them in my Fav Poem ) to think over them later. Have a good Sunday! Oleg
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