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The Real You

On my early morning walks I dress in workout clothes, A baseball cap and old wire specs, For comfort, I suppose. I pass some people every day Yet there are just a few With whom I share a smile or wave; Of names, I have no clue. They must live in the neighborhood, But never do we meet Except for when we exercise; Today, though on the street I passed a walking “friend” And recognition went both ways. We laughed and then she said, “It’s the real you!” and, in her gaze, I understood just what she meant. With earrings, clogs and jeans And round blue glasses, I look different From our morning scenes. Of course, she, too, looked different But I’m glad we could reveal To each other that persona That the world would see as “real.”

Copyright © | Year Posted 2023




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Date: 6/26/2023 3:23:00 PM
Ilene l love your poetry because its always so real about life's happenings….enjoyed this one greatly! Debx
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Date: 6/22/2023 7:18:00 PM
The real poetic thing. Like we do here. I see your name but it's not personal like other friends here which you and I have seen for years.
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Date: 6/22/2023 12:27:00 PM
We are so alike Ilene, I too dress down and its a surprise for folk to see me in a dress few years ago i was performing a few poems at a charity do in front of 600 people. Had my black dress and heels on, hair up. i did my poems next day friend said he was at the gaiety Theatre I said oh did you like my poems.. he said .. were you there lol. that said that had done a typo with my name in the programme lol:-) hugs Jan xx I'm in disguise as Ive got a dress on today its my wedding anniversary lol
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Ilene Bauer
Date: 6/22/2023 5:35:00 PM
Happy Anniversary, Jan! Hope you’re out celebrating as long as you’re all dressed up…

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