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The Real Tears

Those melancholic eyes and downturned lip, Resembling not so much a whining dog As sorrow crafted with a stagehand’s whip Or acted by some theatre’s thespian cog, Did glisten once with tears of salt and truth, Conveying more the fear of a gazelle Than mocking looks of crocodiles uncouth; And thus protective instincts came to swell. With words of consolation and replies Of wordless love addressed upon the ear, I tried to tease out sweet chirrups and sighs, And out the pores the flaming fever steer. Ebullience half-drowned by th’urge to weep Recalled the duty love had made us keep.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 9/1/2018 2:42:00 PM
some beautiful imager and phraseology here Steven. a very nicely constructed sonnet. Thanks for participating in the contest
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Date: 8/29/2018 10:19:00 AM
Lovely Sonnet, Steven. Welcome to Poetry Soup
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