The Real Tears

Those melancholic eyes and downturned lip,
Resembling not so much a whining dog
As sorrow crafted with a stagehand’s whip
Or acted by some theatre’s thespian cog,
Did glisten once with tears of salt and truth,
Conveying more the fear of a gazelle
Than mocking looks of crocodiles uncouth;
And thus protective instincts came to swell.
With words of consolation and replies
Of wordless love addressed upon the ear,
I tried to tease out sweet chirrups and sighs,
And out the pores the flaming fever steer. 
Ebullience half-drowned by th’urge to weep
Recalled the duty love had made us keep.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Agustin Avatar
August 24, 2025 at 12:30 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
Lawless Avatar
September 1, 2018 at 2:42 PM
some beautiful imager and phraseology here Steven. a very nicely constructed sonnet. Thanks for participating in the contest
Stebbings Avatar
August 29, 2018 at 10:19 AM
Lovely Sonnet, Steven. Welcome to Poetry Soup
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