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Potato chip, I love you up, my darling little buttercup. A cup! A Reese’s chocolate one with peanut butter. Oh, what fun! What fun is time with nacho chips; delightful cheese to tease my lips. My lips around a hamburger, with onion rings my heart to stir. Stir the chili in the pot. Add Tabasco; cook it hot. Hot, that snack I love so well, is buttered popcorn that I smell. Smell the pasta fantasy- sauce and parmesan for me. Me and cheesecake, cherries atop. Once I start, I cannot stop. Stop for ice cream; what I wish- a sundae sitting in a dish. Dish me up some southern fried with mashed potatoes on the side. A side of bacon, crispy fat. I see nothing wrong in that! That’s a spicy hot tamale. Enchiladas make me jolly. Jolly Christmas; candies sweet, turkey, ham; so much to eat. Eat a pizza. It’s the best. Now I’ve gotta take a rest. (An oldie of mine where I tried to make each new couplet start with the word at the end of previous couplet) For Juliet Ligon's 'Most Original' Poetry Contest

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Date: 5/31/2021 7:40:00 PM
Dear Andrea, your poem is a delicious delight! Congratulations for your excellent win in Juliet's contest. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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Date: 5/26/2021 2:26:00 AM
Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this. God bless you.
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Date: 5/24/2021 9:13:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. What a wonderful, creative and fun write. I Love It. When do we eat??? You made me hungry. Have a blessed day/week..................
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Date: 5/24/2021 5:56:00 AM
Congrats, Andrea. So fun. I smiled all the way through this one. Great work. Blessings.
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Date: 5/23/2021 5:38:00 PM
Congratulations on your placement, Andrea! I love the idea of starting the next line with the end of the previous one. I did a poem like this called "Dream of Home" a few years ago, but I probably got the idea from you.
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Date: 5/23/2021 4:14:00 PM
Heading to the frig now - avoiding the scale for a couple of days - banning the word calories! Noticed your formatting before your note. Very clever my friend and it rhymes!!!! Congratulations on your top placement! Here's to snacking and yumminess!
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Date: 5/23/2021 3:18:00 PM
Congratulations on your win in the most original poem contest. A delightful poem! How creative what you have done with the ending and beginning word of each couplet. Brilliant! Love ~ Mala
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Date: 5/23/2021 1:55:00 PM
Such a delight. I love to eat and you are making me so hungry. Well, its almost 2 pm; but I just had late breakfast a couple of hours ago. Congratulations.... Have a good Sunday.
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Date: 7/10/2016 9:25:00 PM
Congrats on your win a veritable cornucopia of things I should avoid
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Date: 7/2/2016 6:12:00 AM
Congrats to win the first place as usual.Hugs
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Date: 6/30/2016 9:18:00 PM
Congratulations on your First Place, Andrea. Made me feel hungry. Barry.
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Date: 6/30/2016 2:50:00 PM
Congratulations on your First Place on the podium, Andrea! Scrumptious from start to finish! Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 6/30/2016 1:24:00 PM
Congrats on your win...this is si harmonious...about foods! :D
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Date: 6/30/2016 11:57:00 AM
You make my mouth water while I eat my lunch salad:)
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Date: 6/30/2016 10:56:00 AM
Andrea, congratulations on your first place win of the food contest. After I read your poem, I gained my five pounds back which I lost some time ago. Thanks for the calories! ~ Sonia
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Date: 6/30/2016 10:21:00 AM
Now that's part of what I imagine heaven to be, lolest. Congrats Andrea, for your well, deserved first placement in the contest!! ;-)
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Date: 6/30/2016 9:52:00 AM
You must be related to my family.....all our favorites are on your list !!! Well done, Andrea!! Congrats to you!
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Date: 6/30/2016 6:56:00 AM
Damn Andrea, the PC Food Police will be placing you on the "No Shop" list...congrats on the top placement....now wipe your chin and get back to work
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Date: 6/29/2016 10:48:00 PM
Oh girl you rock :) congratulations on this beauty and taking 1st place !!!! Hugs sweet friend
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Date: 6/29/2016 10:03:00 PM
Congratulations Andrea, loved this poem most, You had me at buttercup. great fun write.
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Date: 12/3/2015 1:15:00 PM
Congratulations Andrea.
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Date: 12/1/2015 8:38:00 PM
A wonderful, delightful, entertaining and flowing rhyme - absolutely my favorite so far. Congratulations ... CayCay
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Date: 12/1/2015 6:43:00 AM
Your poem made me hungry after taking breakfast, lol. Congrats for your WIN Andrea! ;-)
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Date: 11/29/2015 10:16:00 PM
Ah such a sumptuous write Andrea.. congrats on lovely win!
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Date: 11/29/2015 7:58:00 PM
Wow, Andrea, you covered all the good stuff in fine form! Love it. Congrats on your nice win. Hugs, Sandra
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