The Reading

…. and I wondered as I wrote the poem
if the weight on either side of the words
were sufficiently balanced to hold the 
poem in check.  So that when read aloud
the meaning would be pivotal, hanging
on to unsaid words, implied in partiality 
by my favorite phraseology and method,
a potpourri of high, lows and in between.

Oh, wonder of wonders, can you believe
all that applause for just one small poem?
Thank you so much for all your kindness.
It’s more honor than one should receive.

There’s a delicate art in being discreet, yet 
forceful.  Not for the faint hearted or meek.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Gasun Avatar
October 20, 2012 at 8:58 PM
My belated congratulations on your super win, Charles! hugs:) Leonora
Rabary-Andriamanday Avatar
October 20, 2012 at 2:01 PM
Great ideas and enjambements: a masterpiece! Congratulations for your 1st place! Hanitra.
Eastman Avatar
October 20, 2012 at 12:29 PM
Bravo! And congratulations on the win.
Kendrick Avatar
October 18, 2012 at 11:03 AM
I knew that this was a winner..Enjoyed reading again..Congrats on your win..Sara
Johnson Avatar
October 18, 2012 at 8:42 AM
Congratulations Charles on big win with this magnificent interpretation of the contest.. It was as if you knew the high honor that your words would bring. I am highly impressed. Pray you and your wife are doing well. Love, Joyce
Grisetti Avatar
October 18, 2012 at 7:47 AM
I really like what you have done to the sonnet. Congratulations on a great poem.
Sweetheart Avatar
October 18, 2012 at 6:49 AM
CONGRATS CHARLES ON A SPLENDID WRITE AND WIN LUV .. TOP NOTCH WORK ..
Brown Avatar
October 18, 2012 at 6:22 AM
Congratulations on your 1st place win in Cyndi's contest Charles. Love, Carol XXXX
Guzzi Avatar
October 18, 2012 at 6:00 AM
Go Chas go..very different now you have to tell your Debbie-Do how to DO this!! Congrad's on your win! Light & Love
Sefunmi Avatar
October 18, 2012 at 5:53 AM
I enjoyed reading this lovely poem. congrats on your win!
Liwayway Avatar
October 18, 2012 at 1:14 AM
Congratulations on your wonderfully written poem friend Charles :) cheers!!!!!!!!!
Macmillan Avatar
October 17, 2012 at 9:21 PM
Hi! Congrats, Charles on winning first place. Yours blew me away. Please, if and when you can, stop by my blog. I detailed why yours received the top honours. You, sir, are such a crafty scribe. You'll have to teach me this discreet thing... ;-)... course, you'd have to be patient. May take another 20 years :)
Guzzi Avatar
September 24, 2012 at 3:43 PM
ahhhhhhhh HA! good on you you 'got through!' and delicately..where are you? Light & Love
Guzzi Avatar
September 24, 2012 at 3:43 PM
great use of enjambment!
Poet Avatar
September 22, 2012 at 10:06 PM
An interesting Sonnet here Charles.Enjoyed the read.Is this for Cyndi's contest.
Grisetti Avatar
September 22, 2012 at 7:04 PM
An enjoyable poem. So glad to read your poems tonight.
Kendrick Avatar
September 22, 2012 at 7:05 AM
Enjoyed reading your well thoughtout work..Sara
Kendrick Avatar
September 22, 2012 at 7:37 AM
Charles, I don't know how to remove or change this part so I will just add on a note..Charles rewrote some of his poem after I commented so disregard below...Sara
Kendrick Avatar
September 22, 2012 at 7:06 AM
Or is it just wanting to be able to approve themselves?..Or to get those stressful moments down on paper to get them out of the brain?...Sara
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