The Raven's Call

In the icy white living mists, in the grayness 
Rising up around the olden mossy stones
I hear them calling through the smudging grey veils
That separate this world of unexplainable sadness
From the unknowable, from the unknown
They say the raven,  wisest of the birds,
A spirit animal, the shaman’s own,
Renewal, divination, and introspection  
Passes into the eternal,  there  she finds a second home
Finds a glowing light even in this eternal darkness
Standing in the inky blackness she fends off the icy fear
 

Oh raven,
Raven return from the mists--stay clear, return here
Pale woman in black, in human or silken ghostly form
In whatever shape you chose, a change of consciousness,
To face the cavern's darkness then renewal, to be reborn
Amidst this starless somber world, you call a second home
Introspection and connection --  Both to the newborn   
And to the crone.



Among the Dead Contest
Written by Linda Milgate
contest by Rambling Poet
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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February 24, 2011 at 11:52 AM
I had only read a couple of the poems and wanted so badly to enter but...too many things were going on and didn't get to. I knew Constance would have a time selecting her winners. There is a long list of winners here. You should be so proud of your winning poem congratulations Linda. Love, Carol
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February 19, 2011 at 7:12 AM
Many congratulations Linda on your fine win in Constance's wonderful contest....:)
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February 18, 2011 at 6:52 PM
Great write here Linda!Congrats on your big win!
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February 18, 2011 at 6:23 AM
Very good poem, Linda, and the last two lines are positively stunning. Congratulations on your win! Love, Carolyn
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February 18, 2011 at 12:25 AM
Sensational story, Linda. Many congrat's on your BIG WIN. Lainie
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February 17, 2011 at 6:28 PM
Congratulations on your win with this fascinating write. Love, Joyce
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February 17, 2011 at 6:26 PM
You did very well here, Linda. Congratulations to you on winning in Constance's contest.
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February 17, 2011 at 6:07 PM
Linda, great job, and congratulations on your honored sixth place win. Agape, Moses
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February 17, 2011 at 5:33 PM
Congratulations on the sixth place win in the contest of Constance, Linda
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February 17, 2011 at 4:48 PM
Congrats Linda on your wonderful win in Among the Dead with this exceptional entry luv.. enjoy another sweet success and victory ...
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January 18, 2011 at 10:14 PM
Good luck with this wonderful entry into the contest. Harry
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January 16, 2011 at 10:28 AM
A truly brilliant interpretation of the photograph, Linda. I like the way you described the "change of consciousness." I did something similar with my interpretation. Awesome use of imagery to describe both the graveyard and the woman. Wishing you success in the contest, dear. Love, Carolyn
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January 15, 2011 at 2:09 PM
Terrific write Linda. Kind of Poe-esque. Love it. Good job. Joe
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January 15, 2011 at 1:49 PM
Hi Linda. thanks for the visit. I have to tell my wife my password as I keep forgetting it, (it's an age thing) The very best of luck with this great write. I'm sure that it will do well. To you, joy and peace, Eamon
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January 15, 2011 at 1:46 PM
VERy well done, linda. Taking it to the supernatual realm. Good luck in the contest.Luv, Andrea
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