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The Raven, Revisited

The raven loosened up his belt And had himself a patty melt. “Don’t eat so much”, I did implore As he spat out an apple core. Quoth the raven, “I’ll have some more.”

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Date: 5/1/2024 2:44:00 PM
nice rhyme poem, cleverly written
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Date: 4/30/2024 7:56:00 PM
LOL…a unique take on Poe’s raven
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David Crandall
Date: 4/30/2024 8:49:00 PM
I had to go deep for that one! :-)

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