The Raven

Through the open window
An unintended entry way
Pale the moonlight streaming
Careless, now the price to pay

It perched upon my bedpost
All reality to confound
A tilted head, a beady eye
As yet he made no sound

My secret now revealed
He knew my every thought
My visitor in a feathered cape
Harbinger of death he brought

At last a guttural  caw I heard
And in terror begged" no more",
"Leave me be to my just fate
for yes, I killed the fair Lenore"….


With apology to Mr... Poe
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Terry Avatar
November 11, 2014 at 6:20 AM
I think Edgar would be delighted with this very atmospheric poem I certainl was
Kayode Avatar
October 14, 2014 at 8:40 AM
Super,congrats Barbara.
Mehta Avatar
October 13, 2014 at 9:55 PM
Wonderful poem, Barb, congrats on the win
Deschler Avatar
October 13, 2014 at 6:41 PM
I really liked your version of how the story could end. The rhyming in this poem was really great, as well! Congrats on your win, Barbara!
Flannery Avatar
October 5, 2014 at 10:46 AM
Very nice piece on it's own and then in relating it to Poe was a brilliant touch. Thank you for your comment. I prayed that all involved may find the peace and understanding to comfort their hearts.
Austin Avatar
October 3, 2014 at 3:18 PM
Poe Lenore. Great stuff, Barb. I can see that damnable black devil clear as a bell. Shoot it quick I spent 10 days in the hospital a little bit ago. They ran every test known to man on me, but couldn't find out what was wrong. I'm 85, that is what is wrong. Love, daver
Gorelick Avatar
October 3, 2014 at 3:52 PM
You have me by a few years, but not many. I swear, every day it seems there is a new concern. I hope you feel better soon. Congrats on making it to 85..with warm regards. BG
Petersen Potter Avatar
October 3, 2014 at 1:01 PM
Wonderful poem Barb! I just love Poe! I give you a 7! Good luck in contest! Hugs! Love and light! xxxxx D
Marcum Wong Avatar
October 3, 2014 at 3:08 AM
This is so sweet Barbara. What a treat! I would imagine that Mr. Poe would be thrilled knowing that he is still alive and well to poets who love his work! Excellent!
Yvonne Avatar
October 2, 2014 at 8:44 PM
This is excellent Barbara. I love it.
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