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The Raven

"Scary raven, do not hover In the sky above my head". Russian folk song The raven is raving. I have no use of prophets like you. Non-being lingers. My life, so infertile, so sandy, so loose, continues to slip through my fingers. The crook, you foretold me an ultimate null: no eagernesses, no eagers, though death, so frustrating, so banal, so dull continues to slip through my fingers. "The time", said the raven. "Behold how it will be over according to figures", though time, so phantasmal, so false, so unreal continues to slip through my fingers.

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Date: 4/29/2019 10:49:00 AM
"As the Raven cross into the dark pits* Its shrieking calls, alarms even down there* Those in torment went into heaving fits* far worse its image to dying souls scare* With trepidation some turned to Poe* Begging, master far away make it go.* Poe only smiled, saying, come my pet* I have far, far sweeter work for you yet.*" My friend, yet again your fine poem hit a hiding chord.
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Kurt Ravidas
Date: 4/29/2019 11:56:00 AM
Brilliant words, Robert. Thank you very much.
Date: 4/21/2019 9:40:00 AM
Nicely done, Very creative. Have a good day.
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Kurt Ravidas
Date: 4/21/2019 10:02:00 AM
Thank you, David. Glad to see you in a here)

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