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The Raterpillar

           The Raterpillar,
( as introduced in ‘The Tigerilla’.


So, now lets meet the raterpillar
He’s a this-and-that-erpillar
In the jungle life is grim
With other mix-ups just like him

His head is of a big brown rat
The rest, a caterpillar that
has no wings but you can bet
He simply hasn’t got them yet

This half a rat and half a moth
Might not chew your fingers off
But this thing might just bite your nose
Then nibble on your favourite rose

Its head bears teeth and whiskers too
And black eyes that fixate on you
The rest is nature’s weirdest fail  
It’s like tail… that has a tail

There was no raterpillar mother
So he’s shocked to meet another
What you get if they lay eggs
Is rats with wings… and many legs

And lo, its got its brand new wings
And now it flys like it’s on strings
A flying rat like Satan made
To seek out every last lampshade
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Bauer Avatar
June 15, 2023 at 12:34 PM
hope i never meet one of them, terry, but i sure enjoyed reading about this strange creature...
Flood Avatar
June 16, 2023 at 4:41 PM
I have to say, I wouldn’t hang about if I met one. Thankfully, I’m of the understanding that that’s a little unlikely… PHEW! Glad you enjoyed, Ilene. Terry
Wolf Avatar
June 14, 2023 at 7:50 PM
Are you SURE that Ogden Nash didn't secretly sire you?! lol. TREMENDOUS humor, Terry. HILARIOUS!! FAVE-time. Thanks, gw
Flood Avatar
June 16, 2023 at 4:44 PM
Thanks for the fave, GW. With your myriad concise witticisms, I think you might be suggesting we’re brothers… except that I use fifty words were four will do. ;-) Glad you enjoyed. Terry
Merryman Avatar
June 14, 2023 at 4:23 PM
Quite imaginative and amusing, Terry! I enjoyed reading it. Blessings, Kim M
Flood Avatar
June 14, 2023 at 4:29 PM
Thanks, Kim. My poem ‘The Tigerilla’ introduced the concept of mixed up animals and, whilst I’m lean on ideas, I’m giving life to one or two of them. Glad you enjoyed this episode. Terry
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