The Rainbow Ride

The thunder drummed; the sky flashed; waters hurled throughout the sky; Once the tantrum had been thrown; we took rainbow rides.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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Gauthier Avatar
December 18, 2022 at 12:21 PM
charming poem ~
Kiser Avatar
December 19, 2022 at 9:49 AM
Thank you Line, I hope you'll have a great holiday!
Krutsinger Avatar
February 17, 2022 at 2:37 PM
I love this happily ever after ending
Kiser Avatar
December 19, 2022 at 9:49 AM
Thanks my friend and a wonderful Christmas to you.
George Avatar
February 16, 2022 at 8:18 PM
It is after a rain when the sky gets clear, that we see the radiant spectrum of colors arching in the sky ! This is a lovely write, dear M.L
Kiser Avatar
December 19, 2022 at 9:52 AM
Many thanks for your comments.
Baker Avatar
February 15, 2022 at 10:25 PM
New form for me. Fun to read and I liked the imagery, M.L. A poet friend in Texas, Bill
Kiser Avatar
December 19, 2022 at 9:52 AM
Thanks so much Bill.
Kyser Avatar
February 15, 2022 at 12:23 PM
That's great!
Kiser Avatar
December 19, 2022 at 9:53 AM
Thank you Jeff.
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