The Rainbow Connection

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The Rainbow Connection~ (Rhyme ) I write with all my heart And every time that I do it I feel all day long Like smiling and laughing a bit Writing poetry for me Is such a powerful tool you see, It’s more like a way of life for me It's more like a "Rainbow connection" too It is such a mighty God giving gift So, if you happen to have it Just toss it like magic powder To all the four winds, and release it Writing poetry keeps me happy And it keeps me from getting bored and sappy It keeps my head and my nerves, and some Of my own sanity in place, intact, somehow From my mind one of these days just cracking But the only thing I hate is all that reviewing And all that editing and scanning that I do After all that hard work and that thinking Dozen of times I find myself alone Changing some of the words positions I see And a few more of those verses lines that I dislike, then There are those crazy times I just go back and delete those too Words and more words, and more of my poetry Writing when they seem my name just to call Poetry make me feel fine all the time Like I am more than ten feet tall Everyday words and more words Inside my heart and head keep coming And all these sentences and words are to me More like a rainbow connection just humming Everyday I love learning more and more words As I have the time to do it for you and me too I love the idea to use them as the Good Lord wants me To, and all in the divine plan that He has for me too Writing in general is so much fun And it can give you along the way a lot of healing too Once you claim it yours and just will it so Writing is so much fun try it and you'll see It can be used in good or bad things All depends on what in your heart you keep My good Lord in all His infinite Love and wisdom Has trusted me forever with this "Rainbow connection" He whispers right into my ears all the time, I listen, I know He wants me to put it all together here in my poetry writing too, So, I am committed in my heart to follow my dream thru And put it all to good use as my Lord Jesus commands me to do I just desire in my heart to honor my Heavenly Father with it And do the best that I can accomplish with it too To bring to your attention that there is really a God Who truly loves you and cares for you no matter what you do. Dorian Petersen Potter aka ladydp2000 copyright@2009 September.09.2015

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Len Gasun

Date: 9/9/2015 10:03:00 AM

This is absolutely a very beautiful poem you've creatively penned my very dear friend, Dorian. I love it soo much and I can relate here. Thank you, thank you sooo much for sharing! God bless you always my very dear friend! love lots and biggest hug, leonora

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 9/10/2015 11:36:00 AM

I love the title and the beautiful song too, one of my very favorite for so many years:)I just love it and it is very special to me for many reasons:)Yes, I got very lucky when I found this graphic to go with it. Just perfect I thought when I spotted it trying to select ever so carefully a few pictures to go with my poem here in the soup.I'm so picky with the photos too, lol :) Selecting right pics for any poem is time consuming but for me all worthwhile for my poem presentation here.I am kind of used to it anyway:)Well, I'll visit you very soon for sure.Thanks so much again to you!:) D.

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 9/10/2015 11:26:00 AM

Thank you ever so kindly Leonora,for stopping by and commenting so beautifully on my poem. I do appreciate your visit and your very kind comments and all that you say so very much my very dear friend.It means a lot to me.You're always so very sweet and kind.I'm so glad to see you again:) Sending you my love also! The best to you always!Wishing you a very lovely week!In his light!God bless you always!Lots of hugs to you too!:)D

Len Gasun
Date: 9/9/2015 10:05:00 AM

Btw, rainbow connection is also a very lovely title and it reminds me of one of my fav songs as one of its lines is shown at the image above. Again, thank you so much!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 9/9/2015 3:20:00 AM

- Yes, you write from your heart, Dorian - A lovely poem - Hope your day will be beautiful - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 9/9/2015 6:09:00 PM

Thank you ever so kindly Anne-Lise,for stopping by and commenting so beautifully on my poem. I do appreciate your visit and your very kind comments so very much my very dear friend.It means a lot to me.You're very sweet and kind Anne.All the best to you!Sending you my love and prayers!Wishing you a very lovely week!In his light!God bless you always! Hugs!:)D