The Rain, the Park, the One I Love

Here am I, so typically, without a place to be
The sky is dark, and rain is falling down
The one I love, so fervently, is holding hands with me
And never was my need so less to frown 

This happy tree, we sit beneath, is dripping like a cloud
The pleasure of our stay is getting wet
The park we love is empty now, and something makes us proud
To share the day that some would soon forget

The rhythm of the rain is for a day of welcome rest
To bring your mind a respite from the sun
But stormy clouds and missing crowds are what I like the best
To laugh all day with someone who is fun

So lovely is a summer storm, the lightning of the day
The majesty of thunder's rolling might
The melody of nature's song, the sweet, enduring way
Of rainfall on my window pane at night

My love and I are resting now, the canopy above
Is heavy still with drops on every leaf
A rainbow arcs the mystery of colors that we love
The canvass of a day beyond belief.

February 12, 2020

Copyright © | Year Posted 2020



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Date: 6/19/2020 12:51:00 PM
Belated congratulations for your win with this one. It's definitely one of your better poems, Bryan. Very well crafted and giving us clearly the images of why you love this kind of rainy day! Lovely.
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Date: 6/18/2020 11:10:00 AM
Enjoyed this write Bryan, congrats on a nice placement!
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Bryan Norton
Date: 6/18/2020 11:06:00 PM
Thanks John. I am glad you enjoyed this, one of my favorites.
Date: 5/30/2020 7:23:00 PM
Yeah, there is just something different about walking hand in hand in the rain s everyone else scurries for cover
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Date: 5/30/2020 9:40:00 PM
Nothing like a rainy day to perk me up. Thanks for the comment.
Date: 5/30/2020 12:13:00 PM
Your words are a blissful shower for this theme. Love the soothing imagery you have used. Congratulations on your win Bryan :)
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Bryan Norton
Date: 5/30/2020 9:41:00 PM
Thank you for your kind words.
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