The Rain Dancer

After the movie finished, the young couple,
kissed and said goodnight.
It looked  like rain was approaching,
as grey clouds came into sight.
He had to look after his golden voice,
protect his cords from any harm.
A scarf was wrapped around his neck,
guarding his voice, his lucky charm.

Opening up above him, the grey clouds burst,
catching him completely by surprise.
Buckets of rain in one fell swoop collect,
in a pool at his feet, right before his eyes.
No way would he let troublesome rain,
destroy the happy thoughts he had tonight.
Starting to sing, his feet begin taking flight,
twirling his umbrella, he dances with delight.

Having a ball dancing in the unrelenting rain,
his clothes are soaked to the skin.
Waving his umbrella up towards the moon, 
round and round he goes, his tail's in a spin.
Suddenly he stops, he's  not singing any more,
someone is standing in front of him; oops it's the law.
Slowly he turns with his umbrella, after a brief warning,
and dances in the rain till the wee hours of morning.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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September 14, 2026 at 10:16 AM
I've really been enjoying your poem and the emotions and imagery were so vivid that i could easily picture them as beautiful illustration. I'm a commission-based manga/webtoon artist, and I'd love to help bring your story to life if you're ever interested. Feel free to reach out at gm@il : akiracomicart2@ or on inst@ akiraa_artly
Agustin Avatar
March 6, 2024 at 8:28 PM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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February 5, 2016 at 5:21 PM
Pam, A great pleasure for me to find and read the inspiration poured from your pen today. Love ** SKAT
Samson Avatar
April 7, 2015 at 4:41 AM
Gud one..bravo
A   Avatar
April 5, 2015 at 3:50 PM
PAM, Dropped by to say hi and congratulate you on having your poem selected by Soup's Administration. This is a wonderful poem to have featured on the homepage. Have yourself a Happy Easter ~Always & Forever~ LINDA
Russell Avatar
May 19, 2014 at 11:48 PM
When I read this piece I felt like singing in the rain
Dietrich Avatar
January 18, 2014 at 7:18 PM
sounds like you just watched Gene Kelley in black and white! or maybe the colorized version!! This is full of delight!
Woolford Avatar
January 18, 2014 at 8:02 PM
I have to be honest and say that "Singing in the Rain" is one of favourite movies. I loved Debbie Reynolds singing with Gene Kelly and Donald O'Connor and I will watch it any time it's on the T.V/ Foxtel. Thank you so much for your comment. Beautbabe
Kelley Avatar
January 12, 2014 at 5:54 PM
Wonderful imagery...well done!
Woolford Avatar
January 18, 2014 at 8:04 PM
Thank you for this comment. Beauty28
Flach Avatar
December 30, 2013 at 10:45 AM
Visions of Gene Kelly dancing in my head. This was a fun read - thanks for sharing. And thanks for stopping by to read some of my poetry - I appreciate it. Joe
Woolford Avatar
January 20, 2014 at 9:56 AM
Oh Joe, please forgive me. I'm so sorry I missed your comment. You obviously loved the movie also. He was a true screen legend. Wasn't he? It was a pleasure reading some of your poetry. I will try and get back there soon. Pam x
Mehta Avatar
December 7, 2013 at 5:14 AM
Lovely expressions on the rain dancer, Pam
Woolford Avatar
December 8, 2013 at 10:25 PM
Thank you for your comment Dr. Ram God Bless, Pam
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