The Rain Came


Once, I had a reverie that I lived in an emerald lush valley,
     Deep and opulent with tangled branches and a flowing stream;
My home was a cabin with planks azure blue painted so brightly,
          The rain came unexpectedly and swiftly and beautiful in my dream;
And the birds called with a frenzied fear and with a terrifying scream.

I heard the thunder rumble in the distance, reverberating,
     Soothing raindrops dripping in a delightful and melodious tempo;
Then the wind and rain were suddenly hitting my cabin, hammering,
          Water flooded the stream and rain fell quickly into the valley also;
My home began to tremble as the deluge cascaded into my window.

I was lost in roaring waves struggling to hold onto something solid,
     My blue door drifted by and I grasped onto it as I flowed away;
I heard a familiar meow and my calico cat climbed aboard with a thud,
          We swirled with the rising water, twirling and spinning and whirling;
Above and down the other side of the valley we glided- two castaways.

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January 23, 2015

Poetry/Verse/The Rain Came
Copyright Protected, ID 01-635-375-23
All Rights Reserved, 2015, Constance La France

Submitted to the Standard contest, 100 In A Row --9
sponsor, PD, Judged 02/2015

First Place
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Kendrick Avatar
February 5, 2015 at 5:42 AM
Being swept away by problems or emotions in a frightening dream..Reads like a winner..Way to go for the contest..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara
Pinet Avatar
January 23, 2015 at 9:46 AM
A gentle reminder that dreams are part of life and no less important than reality for they nourish the soul and spur the imagination. Emile. #7
Mehta Avatar
January 23, 2015 at 8:56 AM
Fantastic write with great and meaningful images,
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