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The Rain Came

Once, I had a reverie that I lived in an emerald lush valley, Deep and opulent with tangled branches and a flowing stream; My home was a cabin with planks azure blue painted so brightly, The rain came unexpectedly and swiftly and beautiful in my dream; And the birds called with a frenzied fear and with a terrifying scream. I heard the thunder rumble in the distance, reverberating, Soothing raindrops dripping in a delightful and melodious tempo; Then the wind and rain were suddenly hitting my cabin, hammering, Water flooded the stream and rain fell quickly into the valley also; My home began to tremble as the deluge cascaded into my window. I was lost in roaring waves struggling to hold onto something solid, My blue door drifted by and I grasped onto it as I flowed away; I heard a familiar meow and my calico cat climbed aboard with a thud, We swirled with the rising water, twirling and spinning and whirling; Above and down the other side of the valley we glided- two castaways. _____________________________ January 23, 2015 Poetry/Verse/The Rain Came Copyright Protected, ID 01-635-375-23 All Rights Reserved, 2015, Constance La France Submitted to the Standard contest, 100 In A Row --9 sponsor, PD, Judged 02/2015 First Place

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Date: 2/5/2015 5:42:00 AM
Being swept away by problems or emotions in a frightening dream..Reads like a winner..Way to go for the contest..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara
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Date: 1/23/2015 9:46:00 AM
A gentle reminder that dreams are part of life and no less important than reality for they nourish the soul and spur the imagination. Emile. #7
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Date: 1/23/2015 8:56:00 AM
Fantastic write with great and meaningful images,
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