The Rain

Rain
                          Pouring
                          Quickly downward
                          Spreading quickly
                           The wind is blowing music to the leaves
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VanHooser Avatar
January 10, 2025 at 12:56 PM
Darlene, thank you for this. It prompted some memories that became a poem I have just posted called "Lullabies of Thunder" from childhood memories to loving the weather as an adult. We never know where inspiration will come from, and in this case, you are mine.
De Beaulieu Avatar
January 11, 2025 at 3:45 PM
Hello Ron, Your welcome. yes you are right. We never know where inspiration will come from. Thank you for making my day brighter. Enjouy your eveening my friend. /Darlene/
Croft Avatar
October 27, 2024 at 9:33 PM
I love when it rains, but hate to drive in it! Loved your last line
De Beaulieu Avatar
October 28, 2024 at 10:25 AM
Hello Karen Croft, thank you for the lovely comment. Hugs. /Darlene/I like the rain, when it hits the windowpane. i like the sound it makes. it also looks like tear drops falling down the window.
Proxenos Avatar
July 21, 2024 at 8:25 AM
The rain does pours down at times, and that is when my heart is so happy for it spreads in our flower beds quickly and the rain coming downward through the tree leaves, is music to them. An excellent Tetractys - i have not as yet ever tried one, a clever write darling Darlene. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer
De Beaulieu Avatar
July 21, 2024 at 9:17 AM
Jello Jennifer, Thank you Jennifer. It did rain and it was windy. So the wind blew the raindrops into the hallway onto the floor. A small puddle was there. I was shocked to see this. blessings my friend. Hugs. /Darlene/
Kendrick Avatar
July 19, 2024 at 2:29 PM
Very descriptive lines. Don't you just love the changes, sounds and scents during and after a summer rainstorm. I enjoyed reading this one. Thanks for sharing it and for dropping by my page. Sara K
De Beaulieu Avatar
July 21, 2024 at 9:20 AM
Hello Sara, Yes I do it is a fresh scent after the rainfall. It is so refreshing. Thank you for the lovely comment. Enjoy your day my friend. Hugs. /Darlene/
Rodrigues Avatar
July 19, 2024 at 1:50 PM
I saw that yesterday! I had to step out on my covered deck but loved the wind whipping up and the showers slightly touching me. The trees in a bluster…all so nice!
De Beaulieu Avatar
July 19, 2024 at 2:19 PM
Hello Kim, Yes it is. it is like the trees are dancing to the b edt of the wind. Hugs. /Darlene/
Babcock Avatar
July 19, 2024 at 8:41 AM
Need the rain as we are into heat at the moment. Yes the wind does make music through the leaves on trees. Nice poem. love phyl
De Beaulieu Avatar
July 19, 2024 at 10:34 AM
Hello Phyllis, I love the sound of the wind blowing in the wind. It is a soothing sound. Love, Darlene Hugs. /Darlene/
Jones Avatar
July 11, 2024 at 3:41 PM
What a lovely thought of rain as musical!
De Beaulieu Avatar
July 11, 2024 at 4:09 PM
Hello Karen, When the wind is blowing the leaves, it is music to my ears. Hugs. /Darlene/ thank you for this wonderful comment. Hugs. /Darlene/
Gentile Avatar
July 10, 2024 at 4:24 AM
I love the thought of the wind blowing music to the leaves Darlene!! I really enjoyed your poem and hope you've been well! Happy Wednesday xxoo
De Beaulieu Avatar
July 10, 2024 at 10:34 AM
Hello Mike, I am fine thank you. I hope you are well. I love the sound of the wind when it blows the leaves . it is like the leaves are chatting. Happy Wednesday. xxoo /Darlene/
Manassian Avatar
July 9, 2024 at 10:49 PM
Ahhhhh...I love rain. What a beautiful tribute to it. Thanks for visiting my page. Blessings.
De Beaulieu Avatar
July 10, 2024 at 10:38 AM
Hello Elleen, Thank you for the lovely comment. I will your page again. Enjoy your day my friend. Hugs. /Darlene/
Rose  Avatar
July 9, 2024 at 6:24 PM
what a great scene you created with just a few lines Darlene, much enjoyed your creativity this evening :)
De Beaulieu Avatar
July 16, 2024 at 10:03 AM
Hello Mystic Rose,Rose,I am sorry to comment late. i just notic ed your comment. Thank you for the lovely comment. Hugs. /Darlene/
Eslinger Avatar
July 9, 2024 at 7:07 AM
OMG, Darlene, this is a keeper, so an instant Fave for me! It rings truth. It inspires. A poem, an authentic & complete lyric from a voice who’s heard the language of trees! Exquisite!
Eslinger Avatar
July 9, 2024 at 7:00 PM
Sorry i misspelled your name! Hope my edit correction succeeded. By hugs
De Beaulieu Avatar
July 9, 2024 at 10:20 AM
Hello Sally, Thank you for the fav. I hear music when the wind blows the leaves. it is soothing. A pleasant sound. Hugs & Love, Darlene/
Wolf Avatar
July 8, 2024 at 5:28 PM
How poetic!! -- 'The wind is blowing music to the leaves.' A beautiful, memorable line, Darlene! Excelsior! :) Gershon
De Beaulieu Avatar
July 9, 2024 at 10:10 AM
Hello Greshon, oh, thank you for this wonderful comment. Enjoy your day my friend. /Darlene/
Kapoor Avatar
July 6, 2024 at 11:12 PM
What a beauty of rains you have captured in this short beautiful poem df Darlene. Love this line "The wind is blowing music to the leaves" With best wishes always.....Ravindra K Kapoor
De Beaulieu Avatar
July 7, 2024 at 9:05 AM
Hello Ravindra K. Kapoor, Hi! so nice to see you here. thank you for this lovely comment. Best wishes to you. /Darlene/
Bowring Avatar
July 6, 2024 at 11:29 AM
Dear Darlene, loved this tetractys. You can hear the rain coming down through your words. ‘ The wind is blowing music to the leaves’ love that line especially. Delightful read. Thank you for sharing. Hugs to you x
De Beaulieu Avatar
July 6, 2024 at 3:04 PM
Hello Christine, Thank you for the wonderful comment. I love the sound to. Hugs. /Darlene/ Enjoy your weekend. /Darlene/
Rodrigues Avatar
July 5, 2024 at 8:02 AM
Quite the outpouring! The tinkle of raindrops on Summer leaves!
De Beaulieu Avatar
July 5, 2024 at 9:56 AM
Hello Kim yes it is quite outpouring of raindrops on the Summer leaves. Hugs. /Darlene/
Goldsmith Avatar
July 3, 2024 at 12:09 PM
I enjoyed reading your wonderful "Rain" write. I love the rain, to see it, hear it, to feel it. Everything gets a drink/bath. Hooray!!!    Have a blessed day....................
De Beaulieu Avatar
July 4, 2024 at 9:03 AM
Hello Paula, Thank you Paula. Yes everything gets a drink bath. Hugs. /Darlene/
Beaufort Avatar
July 3, 2024 at 11:32 AM
Darlene, without many words, you describe a very interesting phenomenon. Rain definitely has an interesting sound that depends on what it strikes and affects. You have me thinking of it as part of an orchestra!!
De Beaulieu Avatar
July 4, 2024 at 9:05 AM
Hello Duke, You know what? it does sound like an orchestra. I enjoy the sound of the rain. My friend. Enjoy your day. /Darlene/
DiMino Avatar
July 3, 2024 at 11:15 AM
"The wind is blowing music to the leaves" -- Indeed! I love the tingle, ping and patter -- the echo and the splatter -- the drip and the run till all the symphony done -- you get a FAV from me. Blessings my friend.
De Beaulieu Avatar
July 4, 2024 at 9:07 AM
hello Joe DiMino, Yes Joe i like all those sounds to. Thank you my friend. for the fav. Enjoy your day my friend. /Darlene/
Sands Avatar
June 30, 2024 at 6:47 PM
Wow. I love this! A Fave for me :)
De Beaulieu Avatar
July 1, 2024 at 9:17 AM
Hello Heidi, Thank you heidi. thank you for the fav. Hugs. /Darlene/
Gifford Avatar
June 30, 2024 at 12:26 AM
Hi Darlene, this is such a lovely poem, as I read your words they took me back to my childhood days where we played and danced in the rain. Wishing you a Blessed Sunday my friend.
De Beaulieu Avatar
June 30, 2024 at 10:12 AM
Hello Zyrool Gifford, Oh dance in the rain. I like to walk in the rain. I like the sound of the rain hitting the roof. or window. It is soothing for sleeping. I will enjoy your Sunday my my friend. /Darlene/ Blessings.
DiMino Avatar
June 29, 2024 at 11:31 AM
I am a fan of rain as well, Darlene; of course, here in Phoneix, sometimes we do not see a drop for months...so it is almost always a time for celebration -- though the winds that accompany can be devasting.
De Beaulieu Avatar
June 29, 2024 at 12:06 PM
Hello Joe Di Mino, I love the rain. Well here in Canada it has been raining a lot. Less warm weather. Oh well we do need the rain. Enjoy your weekend my friend. /Darlene/
Romios Avatar
June 28, 2024 at 12:15 PM
Uniqelly descriptive… Pangie
De Beaulieu Avatar
June 29, 2024 at 10:51 AM
Hello Panagiota, thank you for the lovely comment. Hugs. /.Darlene/
Ray Choudhury Avatar
June 27, 2024 at 4:26 PM
Dear Darlene, I really love this poem of yours! You painted a serene picture of rain. Love ~ Mala
De Beaulieu Avatar
June 28, 2024 at 9:53 AM
Hello Mala my friend. Thank you for the lovely comment. I love the rain. I love it more at night , i listen to it hitt5ing my window and Igo to sleep faster. Hugs./ Darlene/ Love & Friendship
Onclaud Avatar
June 27, 2024 at 2:53 PM
truly enjoyed the cadence of your piece reflecting traits of rain through words and phrases like ' pouring,' ' downward...' really nice!
De Beaulieu Avatar
June 28, 2024 at 9:55 AM
Hello Nette, so nice to see you here. Thank you for the lovely comment. Hugs. / Darlene/
Dietrich Avatar
June 27, 2024 at 1:01 PM
Nice. I especially like the last line
De Beaulieu Avatar
June 27, 2024 at 2:29 PM
Hello Andrea, Thank you for the lovely comment. Hugs. /Darlene/.
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