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The Rain

All night unto dawn a gentle sadness a comforting... there is a dreaming rain falling it is younger than morning mist it is the first and last teardrop as the world recalls its ancient roots. I rest in the backwash of my own ebbing waves. My breath cleansed in the light-stepping rain. Distantly I hear soccer moms backing-out of driveways, the last moment rumpus of heel-dragging kids. I listen as a mail van trundles-by, hear it pushing messages into gawping spaces. Trains merge with geese in long slipstreams of sound. Plants fold fronds and leaflets while dripping blooms bathe. All is well, all unspoiled. The world is a child again. It rains gently now within.

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Date: 3/20/2020 11:22:00 AM
Imagine...the things a gently rain would do to you...vs a tropical storm or hurricane...one of the signatures of nature... Well expressed
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Eric Ashford
Date: 3/20/2020 11:36:00 AM
Thank you for this wise comment Arturo.

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