The Quiet Room

As I walked  into the room,
 the fan turned  slowly,
 beating a gentle rhythm, singing a gentle tune
stirring  the warm air overhead 
while down below, blankets and crisp cool sheets,
opened  onto a large fluffy bed 

in the corner a small lamp burned low 
columns of light danced in the air
and sunlight streamed thru half closed blinds
 While A fly droned on somewhere 
a low voice from the radio
talked on and on into the now emptied mind

The books pages blur , while the head starts to nod
And the feet propped up on a stool keep time 
To a quiet room and a sleepy mind

Dreams gently called with wakefulness gone
Of lazy days and warm green places,
And  the stars shone on into the night 
While the heavens turned slowly in their eternal paces
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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De Beaulieu Avatar
June 2, 2018 at 1:35 PM
Hello Jim Joyce, so nice to meet you.I like your description of the quiet room. Have a nice day my friend.
Dietrich Avatar
May 17, 2018 at 5:02 PM
YOu are such a descriptive writer who knows how to set a mood. Wonderful writing, Jim
Makama Avatar
April 28, 2018 at 7:43 AM
This is lovely and incredible. Your pen overflow with creativity and wisdom. Wishing to read more of your works...
Joyce Avatar
May 1, 2018 at 11:30 AM
thnx m8t..your too kind
De Burca Avatar
May 27, 2016 at 8:09 PM
Such a relaxing poem to read you drew me into this quite room. ...And a low voice from the radio Talked on and on into the now emptied mind , great line.
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