Victor Buhagiar Poet Couplet

The Quest

I battled against the sharp stinging slaps I received
Seems life decided against me or so I believed.
Retired from work at first some just tranquil peace increased,
Till one by one, all my relatives suddenly ceased.

Severe problems abounded, but I never gave up
Despite the fact that bitter myrrh filled up my life's cup.
Solutions scarce, hard to find, but always strongly strove
To care, to love, to find an answer as my heart drove.

Still fickle time may not be on my side but my quest
Goes on, till a solution found so I shall not rest.
I'll be patient, work and wait for Almighty God's aid
Till it's done and I'll be laid ’neath an olive tree's shade.

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Bill Baker March 22, 2024 at 4:58 PM Nice Couplet poem, Victor. We have no control over what may come our way, but it will all end well if we continue to do our best and trust in our Loving and merciful Creator. Blessings upon you, my dear friend. Bill

Paula Goldsmith March 20, 2024 at 10:45 AM "The Quest" is a lovely write/great ending. Age is just a number. I know things get harder as one gets older. Love your writes... Have a wonderful day writing away.................

Beryl Edmonds March 19, 2024 at 5:20 PM Dear Victor, its hard to go on when our loved ones are gone, yes we have to do our best until we’re laid to rest, though we should enjoy the time we have, because for everyone someday we are laid ‘neath an olive tree’s shade… Take good care of yourself, Beryl

Tania Kitchin March 19, 2024 at 4:05 PM Victor, a sad poem but true to life's challenges along our fated journeys.

Kim Rodrigues March 19, 2024 at 11:24 AM Sharp stinging slaps…(poignant) Till one by one, all my relatives suddenly ceased…(sad and beautiful both) I'll be patient, work and wait for Almighty God's aid Till it's done and I'll be laid ’neath an olive tree's shade...Our hope is in Christ…we celebrate that hope during this season. Hugs

Joseph May March 19, 2024 at 6:50 AM A melancholy verse, as your quest continues...

Maria Williams March 19, 2024 at 5:30 AM This is a beautifully sad poem,dear Victor. But I guess that's what life is all about. It has its bitter-sweet moments. We either roll with the tide or we give up, and I know your strength—you are not one to give up. A fave for me...Hugs

Arthur Vaso March 19, 2024 at 3:10 AM Your poetry always inspires me Victor!

Valsa George March 19, 2024 at 12:26 AM What we seek, we hardly get. Life gives us a lot of pain, intermingled by moments of joy. We have to fight bravely, never giving up and calling God to our aid. I can sense your aches and see your courageous fight. Wish you happy and grace filled days ahead.... dear Victor.

Hilda Greenhough March 19, 2024 at 12:23 AM A beautiful, sad poem. Your poems always take me on a journey. I liked your writing.

I Am Anaya March 18, 2024 at 4:16 PM Never give up, poetry and faith are great answers and perhaps solutions too are there. You know it! Wonderful poem ~hugs

Deb M March 18, 2024 at 2:17 PM Aww Victor such a touching emotive poem! Lovely….Debx

Evelyn Judy Buehler March 18, 2024 at 2:09 PM Though aging certainly has its challenges, it is preferable to meet them with optimism and faith, as portrayed in your lovely poem. Best wishes.

Sara Kendrick March 18, 2024 at 11:36 AM Emotive and expressive work. Sometimes it is the hardest for the long livers. My husband's parents, only sibling has gone on plus her husband and so many of his cousins on both sides of the family. On my side, my adoptive parents plus their sons plus many of my cousins have passed. Most of my biological kin as well. I have read to compensate for this problem people need to make friends with people who are younger. Thanks for sharing your feelings with us. Sara K

Vijay Pandit March 18, 2024 at 11:34 AM Poignant, yet hopeful is the voice of your quest, Victor. Splendidly emotive write. Excellent work, as always.

Eve Roper March 18, 2024 at 9:32 AM Time can really wear us down, but like you mentioned we fight and go on . Enjoyed reading hugs my friend

Daniel Henry Rodgers March 18, 2024 at 7:42 AM Dear Victor, What a heartfelt testament to resilience and unwavering determination in adversity. Despite life's challenges and losing loved ones, you persevere with courage and faith. I loved how your words inspire hope and the importance of never giving up on our quests and trusting in divine guidance. - Blessings, Daniel

Andrea Dietrich March 18, 2024 at 5:15 AM You have faced many challenges and still you have survived. We have been blessed to have you here, Victor.

Anne-Lise Andresen March 18, 2024 at 3:30 AM - Life is filled with challenges and we must never give up... even if it is painful and difficult - A lovely and sensitive poem, Victor - Have a great week :) - hugs

Silpika Kalita March 18, 2024 at 2:07 AM Thoughtful with much introspection. Thanks Victor for your ever encouraging feedbacks always on my poems.