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The Pyramid Poem

THE PYRAMID POEM I wish I was a pyramid so a pyramid I will become Indiana Shaw . . . "It will save me from being a square" . . . ; )

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Gershon Wolf

Date: 9/30/2020 2:49:00 PM

I guess this is not an example of 'circular reasoning.' lol. Cute idea, Indiana! :) gw

Indiana Shaw
Date: 9/30/2020 4:37:00 PM

Aye up, Gershon, I was just taking the mick out of the real pyramid poems that I have been coming across on here, one being yours, clever comment, he he he . . . : )

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 9/29/2020 11:58:00 AM

Hello Indian Shaw, oh the pyramid is beautiful. Have you ever explored one? You would be surprised to see what is inside one. Have a nice day my friend.

Indiana Shaw
Date: 9/30/2020 4:43:00 PM

You'e a lucky lass, Darlene, I went to Cyprus once and I was tempted to go across on the trips they do to Egypt, I wish I had now given todays troubles, sigh . . . : (

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 9/30/2020 10:48:00 AM

Hello Indiana Shaw, i have seen them it the 80's They are beautiful. I also went inside to explore with other people. was amazed what I have seen on the walls. You would be interested in this site to explore. Enjoy your day my friend.

Indiana Shaw
Date: 9/29/2020 2:23:00 PM

If there ever becomes an opportunity, it would be the first place I would go, Darlene, then I probably would never want to leave . . . : )