Jan Terry Poet Rhyme

The Puppet King

His strings are wrapped in murderous hands.
He mouths the words his master commands.

Hate and violence was his warm-up act;
He's made a deal with a demon's pact.

A nation bows its head in shame
But American voters are to blame.

You thought to grab the brass ring
And sold your soul to the puppet king.

February 28, 2025

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Alesia Leach March 1, 2025 at 2:30 PM Your poem delivers a strong political statement with sharp, concise lines and a rhythmic structure that enhances its impact. The metaphor of a "puppet king" controlled by sinister forces is effective, painting a bleak picture of manipulation and regret. The rhyme scheme gives it a punchy, almost chant-like quality, reinforcing its accusatory tone. Jan Terry March 1, 2025 at 7:22 PM Thank you for your positive critique. Each of us has to do what we can to stop the madness. Silence is consent. In my small way, I will speak out. May God open the eyes and hearts of those that are seduced.

Tom Cunningham March 1, 2025 at 1:04 PM He's an embarrassment to your great country Jan. Tom Jan Terry March 1, 2025 at 7:26 PM We do what we can to alert those who are misled to the danger.

Nancy Kaufman February 28, 2025 at 7:53 PM Hi Jan, Well, I for one didn't vote for the puppet king. This was well written. I don't know where we will be in four years in this country with him at the helm. We are living in the "deep state" that he is creating. Jan Terry March 1, 2025 at 7:46 PM Each day's news is more disturbing than the previous. I will continue to express what I see and feel as a way to cope with the ugliness. Thanks for your input and support.