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The Puppet King

His strings are wrapped in murderous hands. He mouths the words his master commands. Hate and violence was his warm-up act; He's made a deal with a demon's pact. A nation bows its head in shame But American voters are to blame. You thought to grab the brass ring And sold your soul to the puppet king. February 28, 2025

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Alesia Leach

Date: 3/1/2025 2:30:00 PM

Your poem delivers a strong political statement with sharp, concise lines and a rhythmic structure that enhances its impact. The metaphor of a "puppet king" controlled by sinister forces is effective, painting a bleak picture of manipulation and regret. The rhyme scheme gives it a punchy, almost chant-like quality, reinforcing its accusatory tone.

Jan Terry
Date: 3/1/2025 7:22:00 PM

Thank you for your positive critique. Each of us has to do what we can to stop the madness. Silence is consent. In my small way, I will speak out. May God open the eyes and hearts of those that are misled.

Tom Cunningham

Date: 3/1/2025 1:04:00 PM

He's an embarrassment to your great country Jan. Tom

Jan Terry
Date: 3/1/2025 7:26:00 PM

We do what we can to alert those who are misled to the danger.

Nancy Kaufman

Date: 2/28/2025 7:53:00 PM

Hi Jan, Well, I for one didn't vote for the puppet king. This was well written. I don't know where we will be in four years in this country with him at the helm. We are living in the "deep state" that he is creating.

Jan Terry
Date: 3/1/2025 7:46:00 PM

Each day's news is more disturbing than the previous. I will continue to express what I see and feel as a way to cope with the ugliness. Thanks for your input and support.