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The Pulse of Saturday Night

Memories of the old dance hall
are sealed in the mind of a middle-aged 
bopper who remembers the magic 
of Saturday night many years ago when her
date appeared before the door whistling the 
latest tune while combing his slick hair looking 
handsome in his plaid jacket and freshly 
polished white bucks.

The rag-top Chevy had a Saturday 
night shine with its loud music playing
from its AM radio while both sat close together 
with his arm around her pony-tailed shoulders,
they laughed in love as he peeled rubber at
the traffic light rushing to meet the gang at
Wally's Drive-in for burgers and shakes,
and then on their way to a night of be-bop-a-loopa.

Boarded windows, faded paint, a fallen sign and
unmowed grass are yesterday's memories of a time
when going steady, wearing letter sweaters and 
exchanging rings were favorite things to do,
she stops and stares at the old dance hall recapturing
the pulse of Saturday night which gives blueberry 
feelings to her well-seasoned heart.


(Topic:  Traveling back in time)

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 5/17/2020 10:56:00 AM
I love this poem! It put a smile on my face as I could clearly see the young couple in my mind! Well done and congratulations on your win! Ingrid
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Sonia Walker
Date: 5/17/2020 1:16:00 PM
Ingrid, this poem brought back some nostalgic memories. Thank you for your enthusiastic comment. ~ Sonia
Date: 5/17/2020 3:08:00 AM
Beautiful write - congratulations on your well-deserved win in Brian's contest, Sonia - best wishes and keep the ink flowing, my friend! ~ the bard
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 5/18/2020 12:53:00 AM
I am one myself ('58 - graduated spirit of '76!) and wrote a similar piece called "Now It's Our Turn" .. you might get a smile from it. Blessings! :o) <3
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Sonia Walker
Date: 5/17/2020 9:38:00 AM
Gregory, your kind words on my 'baby boomer poem' are truly appreciated. Thank you. ~ Sonia
Date: 5/26/2017 10:23:00 AM
Oh, how I love this poem! It resonates with me in a way that makes me smile while tearing up! I remember dating and playing 8-track tapes and going to dance parties at other kids' houses. I remember saying, "That's a funny-looking cigarette." (Boy was I sheltered and dumb!) I too have a storehouse of memories! Congratulations on your well-deserved win, Sonia! Janice
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