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The Pull of the Moon

I look up and feel the pull of the moon, It’s setting my blood on fire; My anger burning below my skin, Temper running higher and higher; An inexplicable hate is taking domain, For no reason at all it’s taking control; The moon is making me insane, Capturing my very soul; I feel it in every breath I take, As the full moon rises overhead; Every second causes my body to shake The minutes tic by, filling me with dread, This pull that I feel I can’t explain, My subconscious is slowly breaking through; Filling my essence with hatred and pain, Imprisoning my heart, skewing my view.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 10/20/2010 9:18:00 AM
A very nice write, very rich w/ emotion. Moon poems are rarely done well it seems, but I enjoyed u'r's!
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Date: 10/15/2010 12:48:00 PM
wonderful! Too good, I loved every word :)
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Date: 9/30/2010 8:06:00 PM
Lovely Tirzah, and thanks for setting me straight. i would have ner thought of that. Your poem sounds lie magic,..p.d.
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Date: 9/30/2010 1:34:00 PM
I suspect the pull of the moon is a very personal (Chick) thing- the thirty day cycle and all that- ha ha only joking the moon does or must affect us all funny things happen around full moon just note ! a very good piece !
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Date: 9/29/2010 7:46:00 PM
Awesome piece Tirzah my friend... enjoyed every line of description and detail... visual and vivid in expression luv... good luck if for any contest on soup...hope u are well. and happy ...
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