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The Promise of Spring - a Fibonacci

I 
Will
Kiss you
While you sleep
Lady dressed in white
And melt your cold heart  made of ice

Then
You
Will rise
Liquefied
High into the sky
And fall as raindrops from God’s eyes

To
The 
Waiting
Buds below
Where now you will grow
With me - in the bloom of a rose


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Author:  Elaine Cecelia George


* Note:  This poem is a Personification as well as a triple Fibonacci

Brian Strand's 'Image Contest':     First Place
John Heck's  '12-in-one' Contest:  First Place

Copyright © Elaine George | Year Posted 2008

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Beata Agustin Date: 11/11/2023 11:26:00 PM Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed. Login to Reply

Frances Schiavina Date: 11/7/2023 7:20:00 AM Congratulations Elaine on your masterpiece poem. Left me breathless. Login to Reply

Kim Merryman Date: 4/14/2021 2:08:00 PM A lovely write, Elaine! Congrats on your win! Blessings, Kim M Login to Reply Elaine George Date: 4/21/2021 2:17:00 PM Thank you for stopping by and for your much appreciated comments, dear Kim.

Brian Mcclain Date: 3/6/2016 12:30:00 AM Hi Elaine, Hey, that's pretty neat--a very well-written, triple Fibonacci. Nicely done! Cheers, Brian Login to Reply

Carol Sunshine Brown Date: 2/28/2011 6:36:00 AM Congratulations on your win in John's contest Lainie. Love, Carol Login to Reply

Caryl Muzzey Date: 2/27/2011 11:19:00 AM Congrats on your win with this wonderful piece. I enjoyed the read. Caryl Login to Reply

Kabuteng P.Ink K. Date: 2/27/2011 9:22:00 AM Super congrats on your beautiful & awesome write here, such an amazing job you did here Lainie :) Login to Reply

John Heck Date: 2/27/2011 6:21:00 AM CONGRATS, Elaine! Peace always, John Login to Reply

Robert A. Dufresne Date: 2/27/2011 6:00:00 AM congratulations to you Elaine. Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 2/27/2011 12:06:00 AM way to go in this wonderful contest, Lainie, I am glad that I got to see it here because this was a gem of yours I had missed! Luv,Andrea Login to Reply

Kory Calhoun Date: 2/26/2011 10:49:00 PM Hi Elaine - this Fibonacci reads like a soft and soothing lullabye. Sweet and embracing. So very inviting. Congrats on your #1 WIN in Mr. Heck's contest. Best wishes, KC Login to Reply

Nette Onclaud Date: 2/26/2011 9:30:00 PM really extraordinary, elaine! my happy cheers to you for the fine win :) huggs, nette Login to Reply

John Freeman Date: 2/26/2011 7:10:00 PM Awesome job , good to see you with a top spot, Elaine. Congratulations on your worthy poem's honored first place. Agape, Moses Login to Reply

Debbie Guzzi Date: 2/26/2011 5:07:00 PM exotic verse from an exotic woman congrad's on your fine win. Light & Love Login to Reply

Sara Kendrick Date: 2/26/2011 4:23:00 PM Congratulations on your win..Sara Login to Reply

Carrie Richards Date: 2/26/2011 2:21:00 PM You have written another breath-taking poem ....so beautifully!! Congratulations dear, Elaine!! Login to Reply

Kash Poet Date: 2/26/2011 2:15:00 PM An awesome write from you Elaine!Congrats on your 1st place win!---kashinath Login to Reply

Linda-Marie Sweetheart Date: 2/26/2011 12:57:00 PM Congrats Lainie on your first place win in John's contest my friend.. amazing as always .. enjoy with luv.. Login to Reply

Donna Golden Date: 6/2/2009 1:18:00 PM This is a gorgeous piece, Elaine. You've created a moment and mood for all of the senses. So creatively and beautifully done! Congrats on your First place honor! Donna Login to Reply

Ed Coet Date: 8/21/2008 10:25:00 AM I've been out of net Eaine so this is my first opportunity to congratulate you on this well deserved win. All the best - ED Login to Reply

Michael Degenhardt Date: 7/17/2008 5:16:00 AM Love thee form here and the imagery you create is absolutely amazing. Love this read! Michael Login to Reply