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* Note: This poem is a Personification as well as a triple Fibonacci

Brian Strand's 'Image Contest': First Place
John Heck's '12-in-one' Contest: First Place

The Promise of Spring - a Fibonacci

I 
Will
Kiss you
While you sleep
Lady dressed in white
And melt your cold heart  made of ice

Then
You
Will rise
Liquefied
High into the sky
And fall as raindrops from God’s eyes

To
The 
Waiting
Buds below
Where now you will grow
With me - in the bloom of a rose


           ~~~
Author:  Elaine Cecelia George


* Note:  This poem is a Personification as well as a triple Fibonacci

Brian Strand's 'Image Contest':     First Place
John Heck's  '12-in-one' Contest:  First Place

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Beata Agustin

Date: 11/11/2023 11:26:00 PM

Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.

Frances Schiavina

Date: 11/7/2023 7:20:00 AM

Congratulations Elaine on your masterpiece poem. Left me breathless.

Kim Merryman

Date: 4/14/2021 2:08:00 PM

A lovely write, Elaine! Congrats on your win! Blessings, Kim M

Elaine George
Date: 4/21/2021 2:17:00 PM

Thank you for stopping by and for your much appreciated comments, dear Kim.

Brian Mcclain

Date: 3/6/2016 12:30:00 AM

Hi Elaine, Hey, that's pretty neat--a very well-written, triple Fibonacci. Nicely done! Cheers, Brian

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 2/28/2011 6:36:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in John's contest Lainie. Love, Carol

Caryl Muzzey

Date: 2/27/2011 11:19:00 AM

Congrats on your win with this wonderful piece. I enjoyed the read. Caryl

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 2/27/2011 9:22:00 AM

Super congrats on your beautiful & awesome write here, such an amazing job you did here Lainie :)

John Heck

Date: 2/27/2011 6:21:00 AM

CONGRATS, Elaine! Peace always, John

Robert A. Dufresne

Date: 2/27/2011 6:00:00 AM

congratulations to you Elaine.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/27/2011 12:06:00 AM

way to go in this wonderful contest, Lainie, I am glad that I got to see it here because this was a gem of yours I had missed! Luv,Andrea

Kory Calhoun

Date: 2/26/2011 10:49:00 PM

Hi Elaine - this Fibonacci reads like a soft and soothing lullabye. Sweet and embracing. So very inviting. Congrats on your #1 WIN in Mr. Heck's contest. Best wishes, KC

Nette Onclaud

Date: 2/26/2011 9:30:00 PM

really extraordinary, elaine! my happy cheers to you for the fine win :) huggs, nette

John Freeman

Date: 2/26/2011 7:10:00 PM

Awesome job , good to see you with a top spot, Elaine. Congratulations on your worthy poem's honored first place. Agape, Moses

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 2/26/2011 5:07:00 PM

exotic verse from an exotic woman congrad's on your fine win. Light & Love

Sara Kendrick

Date: 2/26/2011 4:23:00 PM

Congratulations on your win..Sara

Carrie Richards

Date: 2/26/2011 2:21:00 PM

You have written another breath-taking poem ....so beautifully!! Congratulations dear, Elaine!!

Kash Poet

Date: 2/26/2011 2:15:00 PM

An awesome write from you Elaine!Congrats on your 1st place win!---kashinath

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 2/26/2011 12:57:00 PM

Congrats Lainie on your first place win in John's contest my friend.. amazing as always .. enjoy with luv..

Donna Golden

Date: 6/2/2009 1:18:00 PM

This is a gorgeous piece, Elaine. You've created a moment and mood for all of the senses. So creatively and beautifully done! Congrats on your First place honor! Donna