the promise

"the promise"

reflective stars
guiding moons
shining suns
wishful dreams
what are these

our glances
our whispers
our embraces
our touches
what are these

the promise is passioned
the promise breathes
the promise is alive
the promise is ours

these we hold

SkyWatcher
01-13-24

loveromancefree verse

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Jennifer Proxenos

January 23, 2024 at 10:42 AM

Hi Lisa my dear friend - I have missed you and your creative, colourful poems, filled with light and love. The Promise, breathes, is alive and is ours in your words, an inspirational write that one can interpret in whatever way it means most to them. Hope You are well Lisa, keep your inkwell full. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.

Lisa Ricci

January 25, 2024 at 3:33 AM

Good Morning Miss Jennifer. Hi. Its so nice to see you. Thank you ever so much for everything. Your commentary your intake your generosity and yes for the hugs and blessings. I consider all of that a gift and hope I'm deserving of it all. Truly. Life continues to consume me. Allow me to be the last to say happy new year. Have a beautiful morning and day. Peace Blessings and Light always. a (smile)

Bill Baker

January 22, 2024 at 3:36 PM

A creative poem to encourage us all the be thankful for the promises of life. We are all Loved, whether we know it or not. It is always a blessing to me to read your poetry and know the heart it comes from. Have a pleasant week. Love and peace, my dear friend. Bill

Lisa Ricci

January 23, 2024 at 4:40 AM

Hello Bill. Good Morning. I am very honored by your review intake and especially commentary. I hope I am deserving of it all. Truly. Thank you Thank you. This is a wonderful and beautiful way to open the page and start the day. May today be a great day in every way. Love Blessings Peace to both you and Sara. (smiles...)

Sam Kauffman

January 19, 2024 at 11:33 AM

You say so much through your simple lines. They are elegant in their simplicity but convey such a depth of meaning as we stargaze, are enchanted by moonlight and revel in sunlight! Thank you for sharing this lovely beauty of promise that we hold tightly. Blessings of health and happiness to you!

Lisa Ricci

January 20, 2024 at 10:49 AM

Hello Sam. Hi. So nice to you see. It is I who thanks you. Thank you very much and happy new year. Words do not express my appreciation for your generous commentary and intake of the entry and of my style. Truly. Thank you. I do not take any of that for granted including your visit. May this day find you well. Have a wonderful weekend. Peace and Blessings always, (smile)

Tom Cunningham

January 14, 2024 at 10:54 AM

Indeed it is Lisa, we only have to open our hearts and minds to receive our promises. I believe leading good lives entitles us to receive all the good things nature provides. Tom

Lisa Ricci

January 20, 2024 at 8:26 AM

Good Morning Tom. Hi. Thank you so much as always. Truly. Never do I take you for granted or your generosity. May all have open minds and hearts. I like that Tom. Have a wonderful day and weekend. Remain safe. Peace and Blessings now and always. (smile)

Silent One

January 14, 2024 at 10:21 AM

this poem resonates with a sense of enchantment and the enduring power of a promise. It invites readers to reflect on their own connections and the magic found in shared moments. The language is both evocative and introspective, making it a beautifully crafted piece..

Lisa Ricci

January 20, 2024 at 8:06 AM

Hello Silent. Good Morning. Thank you ever so much for your intake and generous commentary. Never do I take you for granted. I am honored by your words. Truly. I hope my entry deserves your generosity. Have a wonderful morning and weekend too. Peace and Blessings now and always. (smile)

Hiya Sharma

January 14, 2024 at 8:28 AM

Wow, this is such a beautiful poem dear Lisa.. How gorgeously you've illustrated those cosmic elements like stars, moons and sun to depict their essence as a 'promise' that the nature beholds and similarly, we hold in our hearts.. The promise breathes in us.. So wonderfully said, dear poetess.. Absolutely loved reading this.. Sending light!

Lisa Ricci

January 20, 2024 at 7:54 AM

Dear Hiya. Oh My Goodness. Hello. Thank you ever so much for you most beautiful and elegant not to mention gracious and generous review. Truly. I do not take any of this for granted. Thank you also for sending light for I consider that a gift. Your intake and commentary enhanced the entry itself. Peace Blessings and Light always. (smile)

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