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The Process Or Kafka's Dream Part 1 (Revised)

Across the cracked concrete slabs, past a fallen dogwood left lying like so much litter at the red brick base of the court house; the jurors strode. Through the doors too heavy for a mere woman to open unassisted and their constant societal reminder of place of strength and weakness; doors serving as the first purposeful architectural devise of disrespect, up to the toy soldiers of the city at their arched metal catcher gate; the jurors of democracy strode. Patted down, prodded, stripped of our individuality, so like the cattle, they assume we are; like the criminals, who we are told are.. “Presumed innocent until proven guilty.”; we too are subjected to the indignities of the law. The jurors moved. Herded up rickety elevators into the bowels of the ivory towers of jurist prudence, funneled in alphabetical order to weary clerks; who sticker, stamp and quantify us, innumerable names to numerous lists; the jurors wait. The sheer nature of the building, the room, its officials, cowed the crowd who sat cud chewing and bottom scratching, awaiting the arrival of the Judge? I sat, longing for the days of Jefferson. the rebirth of the Renaissance man; wrestling with the morality of the ignorant justice? Wondering what poor, schmuck, was to be brought before these modern day Madame Defarges who sat knitting.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 6/3/2010 10:56:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry x2 making it through the first round Deb. I wish you the best in the finals. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/12/2010 3:10:00 AM
Congratulations on your featured write this week Deb. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/11/2010 2:02:00 PM
Congrats on the feature. I liked this when I first read it. Now if I was one of those knitters, I'd be knitting a hanging rope. justice is ignorant in ths country. Only the victim loses. We need to go back to the Old West, try them in the morning and carry out the sentence before sundown. Vince
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Date: 5/10/2010 1:49:00 PM
Many congrats on your wonderful featured piece. Rgds Janette
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Date: 5/9/2010 7:56:00 PM
Congrats Debbie on your featured poem this week on the Soup.. excellent choice to feature and share with us all...luv.. Linda-Marie
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Date: 5/9/2010 2:41:00 PM
Please read the rest of the poem for me ...my friends? Light & Love
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Date: 5/9/2010 2:40:00 PM
Congratulations on your fine poem being featured on the Soups Homepage Deborah >> James
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Date: 11/10/2009 6:50:00 AM
At first I thought Harper Lee and to kill a mockingbird but on a second read it feels more like you personally were subjected to this, probably pretty recently. It was you who needed the guy behind you to help with the heavy door. I can imagine how powerless it must have made you feel. Or I could be dead wrong, either way I guess:) Let's see what gems I can pull out of part 2.
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Date: 11/8/2009 3:43:00 PM
This sounds terribly familiar... ..on the the next part....
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Date: 11/8/2009 1:18:00 PM
ON TO PART TWO.....LAINIE
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