The Private Eye and the Femme Fatale

Through his door she wafts, all eye candy and cigarette smoke. Feigning fear and need with a promise of earthly delights in trade. He, standing strongly alone, listens attentively but always sees more than is shown. Seemingly he melts in her warm, feminine hands, to be molded into someone more useful but easily discarded. Each play their games, vying for goals not perceived by the other. The hand may be more swift than the eye, but the heart… the heart is always quicker still. In the end, neither gains what they search for but both receive more than anticipated.

There can be no trust
‘Tween those who routinely lie
And those who seek truth.


5/3/2019
Pick A Title, Vol 4 - Haibun Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Edward Ibeh

4th Place winner 5/24/19
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Ibeh Avatar
May 24, 2019 at 5:09 PM
You've really captured the essence of a film noir film, Stephen:-) Nicely done! Congratulations on your win in my contest!
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May 24, 2019 at 6:40 PM
Thank you so very much!
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The prose is just WOW! and the Haiku element brings it all home. I tried to select a line to highlight...but I like them all! Nice to meet you! I am a fan!
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May 3, 2019 at 6:53 PM
'The hand may be more swift than the eye, but the heart… the heart is always quicker still.' Great line. Very true poem
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Thanks, Allen. I'm finding this site more addicting and far more satisfying than facebook. Definitely more of a mental challenge. I'm enjoying trying my hand at poetic forms I've never heard of before.
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