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The Private Eye and the Femme Fatale

Through his door she wafts, all eye candy and cigarette smoke. Feigning fear and need with a promise of earthly delights in trade. He, standing strongly alone, listens attentively but always sees more than is shown. Seemingly he melts in her warm, feminine hands, to be molded into someone more useful but easily discarded. Each play their games, vying for goals not perceived by the other. The hand may be more swift than the eye, but the heart… the heart is always quicker still. In the end, neither gains what they search for but both receive more than anticipated. There can be no trust ‘Tween those who routinely lie And those who seek truth. 5/3/2019 Pick A Title, Vol 4 - Haibun Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Edward Ibeh 4th Place winner 5/24/19

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Date: 5/24/2019 5:09:00 PM
You've really captured the essence of a film noir film, Stephen:-) Nicely done! Congratulations on your win in my contest!
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Stephen Tefft
Date: 5/24/2019 6:40:00 PM
Thank you so very much!
Date: 5/8/2019 5:30:00 PM
The prose is just WOW! and the Haiku element brings it all home. I tried to select a line to highlight...but I like them all! Nice to meet you! I am a fan!
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Stephen Tefft
Date: 5/8/2019 5:52:00 PM
Thanks! There are so many good writers here, yourself included. I'm glad to be able to share.
Date: 5/3/2019 6:53:00 PM
'The hand may be more swift than the eye, but the heart… the heart is always quicker still.' Great line. Very true poem
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Stephen Tefft
Date: 5/3/2019 10:06:00 PM
Thanks, Allen. I'm finding this site more addicting and far more satisfying than facebook. Definitely more of a mental challenge. I'm enjoying trying my hand at poetic forms I've never heard of before.

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