The Prismatic Self

The sparring mind requires a venue fit
for wide ambition’s pointed blade—the craze
of poignant poetry’s unbridled wit.—
Masked)by the wily writer’s wire-meshed gaze,

the soul unleashes on the stage of writ 
a flurry of pen strokes, a wanton blaze
of mangled meanings, aiming now to split—
—to split the atmosphere in half…for praise! 

Ah—perhaps, in this contest of our wills,
I do not joust against “you”,—just with “I“;
so the looming question mark lurks near: “Why?”
Simply for the thrills! merely for the frills?
Thus, muses Nietzsche, the great unveiler,
“Bist du echt? oder nur ein Schauspieler?…”

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Date: 6/11/2025 10:59:00 AM
Dear X F, your last line poses a great question of why we write as poets. In my case, it depends on what I'm writing about. Sometimes, I'm the actor, my imagination spinning webs to capture hearts/minds, and other times, I'm real, spinning verse to the universe, revealing my heart/mind. I adore how you addressed this duality about yourself in your soulful sonnet and then challenged the reader/poet to self-reflect on this duality too. Congratulations for your success in Daniel's contest.. ~Susan
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Date: 6/11/2025 6:46:00 PM
Thanks Susan, I'm very happy to read your reflection on my words, I'm honored to know you found it thought provoking.
Date: 6/9/2025 1:12:00 PM
Hello and congratulations on your entry making its way to Daniel's winning list. As a co-judge, I was impressed with your lines.
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Date: 6/9/2025 7:18:00 PM
Thank you! You leave me wondering which line you best liked haha!
Date: 6/9/2025 12:44:00 PM
Dear XF, bravo on your Honorable Mention! And I mean that in every sense of the word for honor not just in recognition, but in the weight of thought, rhythm, and blade-edge clarity you brought to this contest. Your poem, is a crystal held up to the eternal duel between the masked poet and the self behind the veil. You didn’t just write a sonnet you constructed a verbal crucible for existential reflection. Congrats Again! Spring Blessings, My Friend, Daniel
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Date: 6/9/2025 7:15:00 PM
Thank you so much! I didn't think I'd even make the honorable mentions. I very much appreciate your kind words, I found your contest very thought provoking, and a bit daunting.
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