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The Poor Man's Hope - Recited

The artiste's window gradually falling down Holds the view of the prince's throne and crown The ordered maidens, freely, the palace roams Like leaves in autumn, dry, litter the roads “Fall on your wounded knees and withered faith”, The new king speaks into the poor man’s face. “I precede you on earth, would still up there” And thus! The pauper’s hope replaced with fear. The painter’s canvass slowly would make sense, But only after seeming meaningless. Instructed strokes of exotic brushes - - All well worked by the artist’s lines in crossing. In turns and shifts, swift swings and bad skitters, Thorns and arrows pour down like blizzard in winter. They pour upon him like a war ground victim Even when all evil should be out of season. 1/27/2013 i just had to enter Still life’s vile tenderness unfolds a new trick, Of all things on earth, he was the “lucky” pick, It never fails to be true to him each time, - Without him having to pay a wee dime. Would pass the night wherever it found him, Bypass, Roadside, however, he’d rest still. He’d greet the dawn with his ominous tear, And string some words into one in pray-er. What life would hold again in a new day? His dreams, through pain, can board a flight away. So little he is, inside his meek heart, Still deprived of all but his meager lads. The pauper’s tears catch each dust the wheels have cast The wheels of pride, and guile that would always pass His wailing voice thrust swords into caring hearts Calls for heaven (the place), since life on earth’s aghast.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 3/28/2016 1:15:00 PM
I would be interested in your thoughts on my poem " Shattering Rose Glasses" when you have a chance, please give it a read.
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Date: 3/28/2016 9:15:00 AM
You are talented and original. I enjoyed reading your work.
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Dominic Amezimi
Date: 3/28/2016 1:05:00 PM
I am humbled by your kind words Richard, thanks for the inspiration.
Date: 9/3/2014 8:58:00 PM
Congratulations on your win! Excellent piece! Kika
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Dominic Amezimi
Date: 9/10/2014 8:28:00 AM
that's sweet and warm Kika... thank you!
Date: 9/1/2014 5:38:00 AM
Congrats on the win, Dominic.
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Dominic Amezimi
Date: 9/1/2014 4:31:00 PM
Thank you Dr. Mehta, your comments are always welcome.
Date: 8/31/2014 9:36:00 PM
Congratulations Dominic. Well done and said. Just want to add I have a son named Dominik. Love the name.
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Dominic Amezimi
Date: 9/10/2014 8:30:00 AM
:) thanks
Date: 4/22/2013 9:08:00 AM
Dominic, If this is for the "Recite Your Poem" contest, you need to provide a file URL so that the poem can be heard. Cheers, Roy
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Date: 1/27/2013 9:28:00 PM
Hey Dominic I thought this was beautiful and sad. Growing up poor God gives children at least the blind eyes of happiness is enough at least in our family it was so. Touching.
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Dominic Amezimi
Date: 2/8/2013 1:18:00 PM
thank you dear... it was inspired by some lives

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