The Poet's Treasure - a Poet's Worth

The poet dreams, and with a simple glance
at trees or sky or at a mountain spring,
begins to write, endeavors to enhance
each sight of beauty with imagining.

He paints midsummer as a day of gold,
the song of birds at twilight as the tune
for his beloved, whose aspect is extolled
and likened to the splendor of the moon.

At times, his heart is pained.  It seems that doom
pursues him in that chasm where he grieves.
He finds he still must write. . . and there may bloom
sweet wistful roses on his journal’s leaves. 

Though meager be his assets, he bequeaths
to us a treasure with the words he breathes.


For "A Poet's Worth" Poetry Contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012


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Date: 11/24/2020 11:24:00 PM
Had to return to his masterpiece for another read today. Reading through your sonnets is like walking through a favorite art museum, just breathing in the air of imagination and creativity, truth and beauty.
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Date: 10/22/2020 10:29:00 PM
You have so many excellent poems about writing poetry, and this one just got added to my list of favorites. The aspect of nature, romance, heartbreak are all covered so splendidly. The key phrase in describing a true poet: "He finds he still must write". Love the couplet with the poet bequeathing a treasure to his readers with the words he breathes. That's what you do, Andrea! A fave.
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Date: 6/12/2015 8:33:00 PM
Enjoy this description of language as cultural treasure. Surprised about the reverse-gender identification. Just curious, why is your poet a "he"?
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Date: 6/12/2015 8:55:00 PM
gerald, in English, when both sexes are mentioned in the singular, we use the masculine form! For example, "If a person wants to write a letter, he must include a stamp." HOwever, I supposed I could redo it in the plural form and just use they and them!!
Date: 6/12/2015 7:51:00 PM
Andrea, Congrats on your Poet's Worth win. **SKAT**
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Date: 6/12/2015 7:05:00 PM
Andrea, Nice to see this one on Flo's winning list. Congratulations, thanks for sharing your thoughts on A Poet's Worth. Love LINDA
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Date: 6/12/2015 5:26:00 PM
WOW am blown away by this wonderful sonnet Andrea - many congrats:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 6/12/2015 5:19:00 PM
Simply beautiful.
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Date: 6/12/2015 4:03:00 PM
Each line is a gem, Andrea, congratulations !
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Date: 6/12/2015 12:53:00 PM
This is lovely Andrea...love it...Congrats on a great win
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Date: 6/12/2015 9:09:00 AM
Uh huh Un hun...did it again huh
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Date: 6/12/2015 9:00:00 AM
The last two lines are just beautiful. I like a poem that ends well.
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Date: 8/14/2012 10:36:00 PM
Yes! You're such a great poet, Andrea. I also love this sonnet. A poet is also like a painter in mind. I love it. Thank you for sharing and congratulations again for being the number one/ winner in the soup this year! Best wishes always. luv, leonora
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Date: 7/21/2012 1:20:00 AM
Andrea,I believe that you understand what all of us Poets aspire to yeild, a heart in exchange for a language capable of loving Life - I like your style - J.A.B.
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Date: 7/9/2012 7:57:00 AM
Your sonnets seem to flow like liquid gold, Andrea....this one we can all relate to as poets.... pure loveliness, you make one want to write something wonderful with such inspiration! Congrats!!!
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Date: 7/8/2012 6:07:00 PM
Andrea, congratulations with your wonderful win -xox~pd
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Date: 7/7/2012 11:46:00 AM
A beautiful sonnet, Andrea! This one is a first place on my list. Congrats!! Love and Blessings, Rhonda
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Date: 7/7/2012 9:14:00 AM
Congrats on your winning work..Sara
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Date: 7/7/2012 1:04:00 AM
As usual, this one too is quite enchanting. Congrats on the win! Jag
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Date: 7/6/2012 10:56:00 PM
I'm a sucker for a beautiful sonnet and would have placed this much higher, congrats on your win Andrea
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Date: 7/6/2012 10:45:00 PM
i see you won this contest..You surely deserved to sweet lady,this poem is a treasure ,a poem for keeps.. going to my fAVS!Hope you are fine dear..hugs Charma
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Date: 7/6/2012 9:02:00 PM
Well done Andrea. I feel sorry for the folks with appreciation so blighted that they go through life without seeing the beauty and sheer wonder of their surroundings. Love, Joyce
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Date: 7/6/2012 1:29:00 PM
Congratulations, Andrea, on a winning poem. And thank you for all of your support.
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Date: 7/6/2012 11:49:00 AM
Congratulations on your placement in Brian's contest Andrea. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/6/2012 9:46:00 AM
Congrats Andrea...another wonderful sonnet...enjoyed much.
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Date: 7/6/2012 1:54:00 AM
Congratulations on your win... Terry
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