The Poet Speaks of Madness

The poet speaks of madness--madness similar
to what?  What was spoken before this silly syllabus?

Each ant, lifting and carrying, adds bundles of dried
and curled rose petals to the soup simmerings.

Now, each ant stomps rose petals into a silken
gown, as if one could insult a shimmering insect.

The poet further sings of madness, high pitched at
times, then sliding an octave lower for suspense.

The ants love to nap on rose petals, dreaming of
rose scents which they store in their sinuses.

Rose petal soup simmers in ant kitchens calming
an parents and poets--driving ant babies senseless.

The madcap poet imagines herself simmering,
relaxing in a fragrant kitchen full of ants.

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Date: 3/21/2025 12:52:00 AM
What a great imagination you have!
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Date: 3/27/2025 4:40:00 PM
Thank you so much, Karen. This was a fun one to write.
Date: 12/14/2024 10:50:00 AM
Lol love the imagery and the last verse was great. A fun write for you...
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