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The Poet -Half Past Three-

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late night extraction refraction of words veils abstraction in absurd wallpaper gifts sense of the space unhurried, lurid, written on face

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Silent One

Date: 8/25/2024 9:47:00 AM

I was going to do this one.. I didnt realise you were ok for one than one monoku... oh well... Nice selection of words here that really describe the paining and how it makes you feel..

Di11y Da11y
Date: 8/25/2024 12:00:00 PM

Yes I've adjusted the contest text to make it clear it can be one or more. I haven't marked yet, so feel free to make changes

John Lawless

Date: 8/25/2024 5:47:00 AM

YIKES.....

Di11y Da11y
Date: 8/25/2024 5:53:00 AM

Don't we all look a bit like that behind our screens?!