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The Poem I Meant To Write

I regret not writing you down, You swam through my mind Linking words and thoughts With gossamer chains That glistened with meaning, But the kitchen can was calling my name Using the voice of my wife. There were skinned knees to be kissed, Equations to be sorted out, House rules to be followed. Has the opportunity passed? Have you flown, like a caged bird Through a conveniently open window? Are you even now winging toward Another poet, a different writer? I have the scraps, the fragments, The word-pieces I had intended To build you from. I will try to arrange them so, In hopes they cast the same shadow. Like my grandmother’s smile You linger just behind my eye, Waiting for me, Wanting to be released In just the ‘write’ form.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 5/6/2014 8:55:00 PM
love it! this is a real gem! congrats on a well-deserved win...
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Date: 5/6/2014 11:13:00 AM
Hello Christopher, wow..I imagine so much when it comes to a smile... Huge love and congrats..Linda
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Date: 5/5/2014 7:36:00 AM
amazing choice of words.. sweet congrats, christopher!..huggs
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Date: 5/3/2014 6:47:00 PM
ah haha unique and true. So many times my lines get lost because of the moment they choose to enter my head. well you have said this well and much grats on the win ;)
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Date: 5/3/2014 3:48:00 PM
I so like this and the inference to Gram's shadow! Congrad's on your win! Light & Love
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Date: 5/3/2014 3:47:00 PM
Really love this and how true it is. I have kicked myself a few times for not jotting the thought kernel down.
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Date: 5/3/2014 11:52:00 AM
Wonderful writing. It is sad when a poem lingers just beyond our reach or when we have no pencil or pen. Congratulations. Love, Joyce
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Date: 5/3/2014 4:59:00 AM
Brilliant write on poetry. Congrats on the win, Christopher
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Date: 5/2/2014 11:45:00 PM
sweet win... SKAT
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Date: 5/2/2014 10:34:00 PM
Christopher, congratulations on your first place win and I do enjoy reading the poem that won... Verlena :0))s.
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Date: 5/2/2014 10:29:00 PM
A wonderful write Christopher ! chained words really these are ,,n kept me glued thru'out the read,,,,congrats on great win !
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Date: 5/2/2014 10:14:00 PM
I can truly relate to your poem. I've had so many poems that just got away from me, so now I try to keep a pen and paper handy at all times. A wonderful write, Christopher! Congrats on your first place win in my contest!
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Date: 4/25/2014 3:21:00 AM
this is a great write... i relate so well it no pretty...
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Gregory Boyer
Date: 5/7/2014 3:28:00 PM
too bad i relate at this time to it also:-(
Date: 4/25/2014 2:08:00 AM
Can so relate to this - i have got scraps of paper scattered round for when inspiration hits - if I don't write it straight away its gone forever. Hugs Jan x
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