The Poem I Meant To Write

I regret not writing you down,
You swam through my mind
Linking words and thoughts
With gossamer chains
That glistened with meaning,

But the kitchen can was calling my name
Using the voice of my wife.
There were skinned knees to be kissed,
Equations to be sorted out,
House rules to be followed.

Has the opportunity passed?
Have you flown, like a caged bird
Through a conveniently open window?
Are you even now winging toward
Another poet, a different writer?

I have the scraps, the fragments,
The word-pieces I had intended
To build you from.
I will try to arrange them so,
In hopes they cast the same shadow.

Like my grandmother’s smile
You linger just behind my eye,
Waiting for me,
Wanting to be released
In just the ‘write’ form.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Bauer Avatar
May 6, 2014 at 8:55 PM
love it! this is a real gem! congrats on a well-deserved win...
A   Avatar
May 6, 2014 at 11:13 AM
Hello Christopher, wow..I imagine so much when it comes to a smile... Huge love and congrats..Linda
Onclaud Avatar
May 5, 2014 at 7:36 AM
amazing choice of words.. sweet congrats, christopher!..huggs
Nance Avatar
May 3, 2014 at 6:47 PM
ah haha unique and true. So many times my lines get lost because of the moment they choose to enter my head. well you have said this well and much grats on the win ;)
Guzzi Avatar
May 3, 2014 at 3:48 PM
I so like this and the inference to Gram's shadow! Congrad's on your win! Light & Love
Gibson Avatar
May 3, 2014 at 3:47 PM
Really love this and how true it is. I have kicked myself a few times for not jotting the thought kernel down.
Johnson Avatar
May 3, 2014 at 11:52 AM
Wonderful writing. It is sad when a poem lingers just beyond our reach or when we have no pencil or pen. Congratulations. Love, Joyce
Mehta Avatar
May 3, 2014 at 4:59 AM
Brilliant write on poetry. Congrats on the win, Christopher
A  Avatar
May 2, 2014 at 11:45 PM
sweet win... SKAT
Walker  Avatar
May 2, 2014 at 10:34 PM
Christopher, congratulations on your first place win and I do enjoy reading the poem that won... Verlena :0))s.
A. Sharma Avatar
May 2, 2014 at 10:29 PM
A wonderful write Christopher ! chained words really these are ,,n kept me glued thru'out the read,,,,congrats on great win !
Deschler Avatar
May 2, 2014 at 10:14 PM
I can truly relate to your poem. I've had so many poems that just got away from me, so now I try to keep a pen and paper handy at all times. A wonderful write, Christopher! Congrats on your first place win in my contest!
Gregory Avatar
April 25, 2014 at 3:21 AM
this is a great write... i relate so well it no pretty...
Boyer Avatar
May 7, 2014 at 3:28 PM
too bad i relate at this time to it also:-(
Allison Avatar
April 25, 2014 at 2:08 AM
Can so relate to this - i have got scraps of paper scattered round for when inspiration hits - if I don't write it straight away its gone forever. Hugs Jan x
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