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The Planets-Uranus

Smoke rises and blinds us of the view of the amazing gas obscures the light and effects the waves of color and surprises the watchers that are unknown enjoying the spectacular yet shadowed person; the wielder of spells the holder of incantations the possessor of magic! Here he comes unannounced to bewilder and dementia his audience all here have become his followers dazed by his wickedness and praised for his play of unbelievable arts but once his wand disappears and the show finishes so does his admiration close with the red velvet curtains

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 3/8/2010 12:25:00 PM
EXCELLENT well written with powerful word-play.....:JP}
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Date: 3/8/2010 12:10:00 PM
Enjoyed the write..Hope to someday see the planets and stars through a huge telescope. Keep the creative pen flowing. Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work "Google Laminin"..The address that I gave as a reference was in correct or it would not go there so just type in Laminin and you can learn about Laminin..Then type in Louie Giglio Indescribable on YouTube..Enjoy Sara
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