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Often, I think about my twisted bliss, all the things I didn't do or say amiss; and heartbreaking grief stabs me like a knife. O, sweet were the times when my soul felt a kiss! But, piteous and forlorn has been my short life. My deep unseen wounds can never be healed, and when the book of my life is read- all will be revealed; I wake from nightmares and weep until dawn, seeking forgiveness, in many a church I have appealed! My twisted path bloodstained and woebegone. The dead come creeping in dreams full of blame, their tears and wailing fill me with horrible shame; mom, I didn't bring you home to die, my regret is vast, husband, why did I not loudly our love proclaim! Each night, I step through the threshold of the past. It seems to me that my life from the start was doomed, when at six, I watched my sister die- all my joy was entombed; but lovely those beautiful times when I took a breath, from the sadness and regret- that my life has consumed! Yes, I have been damned from conception until my death. O, dreadful are my dark thoughts and my words, but thankfully, nowadays I find peace listening to birds; and I wish, wish for an existence far less gloomy, and to turn back, back time- turn time backwards! And why must I ever, ever recall this dismal woeful journey? _____________________________ September 22, 2017 Poetry/Rhyme/The Piteous Chase Copyright Protected, ID 17-9418-39-0 All Rights Reserved. Submitted to the contest, Best Rhyming Poem September-October 2017 sponsor, John Hamilton Second Place _____________________________ Written for the contest, Rhyme Time With 5 sponsor, Laura Loo First Place

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Date: 11/8/2017 11:44:00 PM
Congrats broken Wings on your excellent poem.Best wishes always
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Date: 11/7/2017 5:52:00 AM
Congratulations on your well-deserved win, Constance - nicely done, my friend! :-)
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Date: 11/6/2017 11:49:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, BW.
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Date: 11/6/2017 9:10:00 PM
Congratulations Broken Wings on your excellent win with your emotional and beautifully written poem. Exquisite!
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Date: 11/6/2017 7:56:00 PM
This is one of your best Constance congrats on a fine win!
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Date: 11/6/2017 7:53:00 PM
Broken Wings, wonderful poem, congratulations on your win! Hugs Eve ~`*
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Date: 10/19/2017 5:46:00 PM
I selected 'rhyme' randomly from your list, and early in the reading (before seeing comments), it was an obvious winner from the getgo. Wow!
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Date: 10/11/2017 2:06:00 PM
So emotional, but so beautifully written, Constance. Congratulation on your top, well-deserved win. Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 10/11/2017 1:45:00 PM
Congrats B.W.to win top.
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Date: 10/10/2017 10:58:00 PM
Gorgeous write, BW, full of intense emotion and description sublime - congrats on your win, friend! :-)
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Date: 10/10/2017 5:32:00 PM
Dropping back with my congrats Constance:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 10/10/2017 7:10:00 AM
wow congratulations on your win x
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Date: 10/10/2017 6:21:00 AM
Congrats, Broken Wings, such an emotion filled poem.
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Date: 10/10/2017 5:58:00 AM
Outstanding and perfect for this contest! I am so delighted with this poem sweet Broken Wings, be blessed. Thank you and congrats :)
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Date: 9/22/2017 5:51:00 PM
Well written and expressed Broken Wings. I can relate to it completely, from seeing my childhood friend die. It never ever goes away. May you be blessed and keep enjoying the bird songs! Good luck in the contest ! :)
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Date: 9/22/2017 5:18:00 PM
Such an emotional rollercoaster of a poem Constance I know Laura will love this one:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 9/22/2017 5:09:00 PM
Words full of emotion--a bit sad--so well written, the reader feels the pain!
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