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The Pillar of Our Love

Across the table gazing in your eyes I see the bright reflections of our love, and like a sweet duet we harmonize with soulful melodies of mourning dove. Our love is ever present in my mind; these feelings that to you I do impart. For not a better lover could I find; you will remain forever in my heart. You touch my hand, my pulsing passions rise; My ever fervid fantasies take flight. I wonder if this leads to love’s surprise, and tangled sheets on sultry, summer night. My love you are the bedrock of my soul; the pillar which forever makes love whole.
May 11, 2018

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Date: 6/2/2018 7:29:00 PM
Lovely John. Congrats on your top win.
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John Gondolf
Date: 6/2/2018 8:43:00 PM
Thanks, Line, I appreciate it.
Date: 5/21/2018 8:13:00 AM
Congratulations are in order again! Fabulous, dearheart.
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John Gondolf
Date: 5/21/2018 8:28:00 AM
Thank you Rhoda, I appreciate your support.
Date: 5/20/2018 5:02:00 PM
Awesome, John, and big congrats for your win.
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John Gondolf
Date: 5/21/2018 4:07:00 AM
Thank you, Andrea, I appreciate it.
Date: 5/19/2018 5:39:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. Enjoyed.
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John Gondolf
Date: 5/19/2018 8:24:00 AM
Thank you, Susan.
Date: 5/18/2018 8:23:00 AM
I'm just coming back to say congratulations on your placement in the contest:-) Alexis
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John Gondolf
Date: 5/18/2018 8:26:00 AM
Thank you so much my friend, I appreciate you! John
Date: 5/17/2018 8:51:00 PM
Such beautiful words John, congrats on a fine win!
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John Gondolf
Date: 5/18/2018 4:38:00 AM
Thanks, John, I appreciate it, and thanks for hosting the contest. John
Date: 5/17/2018 8:26:00 PM
Ohh, such a lovely and luscious sonnet, John. A sensual and loving beauty, especially your third stanza, which got my pulse racing.. Your closing couplet is superb! Congratulations on your awesome win with your beautifully rhythmic and impassioned sonnet. Warmest wishes my friend.. ~Susan
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John Gondolf
Date: 5/18/2018 4:36:00 AM
Thank you, Susan, I appreciate it.
Date: 5/17/2018 8:06:00 PM
Beautiful, John.
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John Gondolf
Date: 5/18/2018 4:34:00 AM
Thanks, Dale, I appreciate it.
Date: 5/17/2018 7:32:00 PM
Beautiful love sonnet, John. Many congrats on your win. Elaine
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John Gondolf
Date: 5/18/2018 4:33:00 AM
Thank you so much, Elaine, I appreciate it.
Date: 5/17/2018 4:39:00 PM
Congrats on your placement John, well done
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John Gondolf
Date: 5/18/2018 4:32:00 AM
Thank you, John, I appreciate it.
Date: 5/14/2018 5:32:00 AM
Wow! John, You write well in the Sonett form. The love that you convey in this poem is what we all long to find. I found it to romantic and passionate as well. I wish you the best of luck in the contest:-) Alexis
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John Gondolf
Date: 5/15/2018 3:33:00 PM
Thank you so much, Alexis, since the contest is summer love, I incorporated both romance and passion - a little something for everyone. :) Glad you enjoyed my sonnet of summer love. John
Date: 5/12/2018 3:51:00 PM
Lovely and so very heartfelt. GL in the contest, John.
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Date: 5/12/2018 3:25:00 PM
This is mua, this is awesome, John! I love the last two lines for they not only speak profoundly but they are what they describe for your poem as well. All the best in the contest! :) ~ Artsie
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John Gondolf
Date: 5/13/2018 12:48:00 PM
Thank you so much for your wonderful comment, Artsie, I’m glad you enjoyed it. John
Date: 5/12/2018 12:24:00 PM
Very nice John. and I love the ending too :) Good luck in the contest !
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John Gondolf
Date: 5/12/2018 12:56:00 PM
Thank you so much, Heidi, you always seem to be the first to comment when I post a new poem; I really appreciate your support. John

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