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The Picture on the Parlor Wall

When midnight flames flicker aesthetic reveries, releasing ashes of rainbow petals, upon the canvas of undressed seasons, I delve into blue blurs of butterflies, framed in floating colors of nostalgia, aching for dried dyes to home this scraped heart~ hanging loose, within smoky imagery, as if every pigment will sprout from lilies of longing. But can memories thaw frozen zeal, illustrating steamy sunsets with liquefied rubies, to unveil a timeless era, retouched and restored, from the dust of dusks composed in surrealism? And I, the splattering of an ink-blot, persist as a dramatized kiss of tongue-stroked silence, like a portrait, isolated in artistic utopia, as love is more than a metaphor that speaks to the moon; a pastel palette textured with melted roses~ saturated stars can interpret…

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Date: 10/21/2024 11:12:00 AM
Dearest Inky, truly, "love is more than a metaphor!" The theme of this poem unwinds with each carefully crafted line, dear friend. As always you revel in distinguished imagery and use of color - an "artistic utopia!" Pure poetic nirvana! Congratulations on your win. I love to take time to savor each word in your poems like a box of sweet delights! Sending you blessings of joy like the joy your poems bring, sweet friend!
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Date: 10/10/2024 4:36:00 PM
Beautiful writing, Ink- as always, and I enjoyed the end....<3
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Date: 10/8/2024 7:54:00 PM
The depth of your art grasps at my soul! How you so beautifully articulate so many emotions here, is like a perfected dance, that comes from a lifetime of longing and beauty that resides within your beautiful heart and soul, my beautiful soul sis! I am immersed in this precious piece!
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Date: 10/8/2024 12:59:00 PM
Ahhh, looky there. You got placed right above me in the contest. So happy for both of us. Congrats, Sweetie.
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Date: 10/4/2024 7:45:00 PM
Beautiful imagery, Ink Empress, something I can envision on a surrealistic journey.
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Date: 10/5/2024 3:09:00 AM
Thank you so much yes, i was thinking of Salvador Dali when i wrote this, you have a very deep understanding of words.
Date: 10/4/2024 7:33:00 AM
Dearest Empress! What pure magic! I could feel the way you blended scenes with deep emotions which is truly stunning. I love how you explore memory and art, creating this dreamy, nostalgic vibe. Your line "aching for dried dyes to home this scraped heart" is so powerful and evocative. I think also what makes this outstanding is the color and texture that really brings the whole scene to life. It's a well-deserved FAV - Empress, you have to keep painting with your evocative words! - Blessings, My Dear Friend, Daniel
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Ink Empress
Date: 10/5/2024 3:08:00 AM
Thank you so very much dear daniel so very grateful always for your thoughtful and sincere comments! Appreciate your poetic presence and support
Date: 10/4/2024 5:19:00 AM
very nice metaphor, are you a painter, enjoyed your creative poem poet
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Date: 10/5/2024 2:35:00 AM
Thank you dear yann, no im not a painter but i love colors and i paint from my mind. I always appreciate your kindness
Date: 10/4/2024 1:19:00 AM
Lovely use of colour & flower. I liked the splattering of an ink blot persisting as a dramatised kiss as tongue stroked silence - this is so like many artists ! Undressed seasons & blue blurs definitely evokes the emerging thought of artistic expression as they begin to paint. Your third eye is so open, Inky !
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Date: 10/5/2024 2:32:00 AM
Dear beautiful soul i appreciate you visiting me always and leaving such thoughtful comments and seeing you here active on soup is a pleasure
Date: 10/2/2024 9:15:00 AM
I would wish to see that picture on your wall. It must be a masterpiece. So eloquent.
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Date: 10/5/2024 2:29:00 AM
Thank you so much dear victor always
Date: 10/2/2024 9:11:00 AM
Ink you paint the perfect portrait wish you well in the contest. Xx
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Date: 10/5/2024 2:26:00 AM
Thank you dear John i appreciate your support truly
Date: 10/2/2024 4:52:00 AM
My dear friend Inky, what a beautiful poem rich in vivid metaphors that evoke a world beyond words. The lines flow effortlessly, painting an ethereal landscape where memories thaw and redefine passion. I particularly love how you craft love as "more than a metaphor that speaks to the moon," . The juxtaposition of liquid rubies and melted roses adds a beautiful sense of fluidity, as if the emotions themselves are being moulded by the universe. A fave for me ….Love and Hugs
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Date: 10/5/2024 3:32:00 AM
Always keep writing and spreading your love and light here. You are needed here my friend...Hugs
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Date: 10/5/2024 2:18:00 AM
Beautiful maria getting a fave from you is a win for me andi thank you for taking time to read and leave such a lovely comment thats uplifting! Your presence is soul warming! I appreciate you so very much
Date: 10/2/2024 4:06:00 AM
Oh my goodness, what a beautifully melancholic and heartfelt piece this is! It absolutely conveys a deeper meaning of memories where longing for those moments makes a home in our heart and leaves a scarred fragment.. I truly felt as if being taken on a journey, so lost in your words which spoke from the heart. You really do the art os meticulous metaphors so well, but the imagery here really made me twirl with my soul in those "blue blurs of butterflies" This is stunning and bewitching my dear fairy goddess...
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Date: 10/5/2024 2:17:00 AM
You always feel the depth of what i convey, thank you for that always dear hiya i appreciate you so very much for leaving such a thoughtful and detailed comment on my poem! Sending you light always
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Date: 10/2/2024 4:10:00 AM
I can never get enough of your ethereal poetry and especially these lines here "as if every pigment will sprout from lilies of longing", "illustrating steamy sunsets with liquefied rubies", "And I, the splattering of an ink-blot" Gosh, just love thisssss... "as love is more than a metaphor that speaks to the moon" So true, it's more than a metaphor and beyond! "a pastel palette textured with melted roses~ saturated stars can interpret…" I simply can't get over the beauty of these last two lines. Absolutely phenomenal, beautiful ink empress, keep shining and writing always ~
Date: 10/1/2024 10:00:00 PM
‘ upon the canvas of undressed seasons’… I love interpreting your metaphors. But only you truly know what they mean. If only you could share your deepest thoughts with us, it would be a grand thing. But we get to rejoice at their surface level. Thank you for writing and sharing such another glorious poem.
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Date: 10/5/2024 2:01:00 AM
Thats such a kind thing for you to say, and i appreciate you reading always and leaving such sincere comments. Thank you so much dear Robert J L
Date: 10/1/2024 5:56:00 PM
Ink, you have brought the canvas images to vividly colorful life! Janice
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Date: 10/5/2024 2:00:00 AM
Thank you so much dear janice. I appreciate your kindness truly!
Date: 10/1/2024 5:51:00 PM
"Delving into blue blurs of butterflies framed in floating colors of nostalgia" Wonderful write
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Ink Empress
Date: 10/5/2024 1:45:00 AM
Thank you so very much dear joseph
Date: 10/1/2024 4:48:00 PM
Such a wonderful poem explores themes of nostalgia, longing, and the interplay between memory and art. It reflects on how memories can evoke emotions and transform experiences into something beautiful, akin to art. The imagery of colors, seasons, and natural elements suggests a deep connection between the speaker’s inner emotional landscape and the external world, emphasizing the transcendence of love and memory through artistic expression. Warm hugs and vibes dear Ink
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Ink Empress
Date: 10/5/2024 12:26:00 AM
Thank you so much for your visit and your comment always happy to see you here
Date: 10/1/2024 3:34:00 PM
Memories, memories. A picture can stimulate memories but they are never real. I enjoy the metaphors. Best wishes .
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Date: 10/5/2024 12:24:00 AM
Thank you for feeling the depth of my words always dear Hilda. I appreciate your kindness always
Date: 10/1/2024 2:20:00 PM
Interesting lines penned in this one. Way to go. Sara K
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Date: 10/5/2024 12:20:00 AM
Thank you so much dear sara always grateful for your kindness and support truly
Date: 10/1/2024 1:30:00 PM
Wow you never disappoint! Your imagery is magical and your word choice is enchanting..."love is more than a metaphor that speaks to the moon". Love it.
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Ink Empress
Date: 10/4/2024 11:37:00 PM
Awwn adore you dearest karen! You are such a beautiful soul
Date: 10/1/2024 10:53:00 AM
So unique and creative, Ink. And referring to yourself as the splattering of an Ink blot is so cool. Is that why you are Ink Empress? haha!! that entire last stanza is so awesome!
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Ink Empress
Date: 10/1/2024 11:34:00 AM
Hahah you are the best!
Date: 10/1/2024 10:10:00 AM
I enjoyed reading your wonderful write.  "Good Luck"  Have a blessed day writing away...............
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Ink Empress
Date: 10/4/2024 11:21:00 PM
Thank you dear sweet paula
Date: 10/1/2024 7:42:00 AM
midnight flames flicker aesthetic reveries, releasing ashes of rainbow petals, upon the canvas of undressed seasons, oh my goodnesssss!!! The intensity papi!!! Got me alll ready to tremble for ya!!! illustrating steamy sunsets with liquefied rubies, Mmmm here I lay for u aee just take me as I am !! dramatized kiss of tongue-stroked silence, like a portrait, isolated in artistic utopia, .. damn!! more than a metaphor that speaks to the moon.. yes it definitely is ! I love the way you weave love. a pastel palette textured with melted roses saturated stars can interpret
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Ink Empress
Date: 10/4/2024 11:21:00 PM
Thank you papi
Date: 10/1/2024 7:11:00 AM
How do you get inspired to write so well ? Love it
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Ink Empress
Date: 10/4/2024 11:21:00 PM
Thank you always dahlin

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