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How old was I then - maybe seven or eight in grainy black and white. I can remember I was standing outside my grandfathers two story terrace house in Sydney. Must have been around nineteen fifty three, school holidays. I didn't like the smell of his place with its old, moss coated brick walls, the claustrophobic backyard and the lack of sunlight. Everything seemed dark and damp. I can picture my grandfather sitting at the kitchen table with his stooped shoulders, wheezing away, rolling his daily quota of cigarettes, glasses set low on his nose, sunken eyes peering at me below an unkempt hedge of eyebrows. I slept on a rickety camp stretcher in his bedroom beneath musty sheets and would wake during the night whenever he got up to pee in his pot. It was always good to get home to a big backyard, a wide open sky, trees to climb and nights undisturbed by the sound of my dear grandfather peeing into a pot.

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Date: 11/16/2024 3:03:00 PM
Paul l love this poem….l was transported again. l could smell the damp from the moss and lack of sunlight, see your grandad rolling his stogies ( not sure if thats spelt right) peering over his specs with those thick bushy old man brows Ha! Saw a little boy in the old rickety camp bed. Your grandad peeing into the pee pot…..that made me smile! I saw ,felt and smelt it all….Im not sure that sounds quite right haha!! It made me think about never having grandparents in my life. Debx Soupmail!!
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Date: 11/16/2024 2:10:00 AM
Childhood memories that affected us the most are indelible. For me it was a night at my grandmother's. She was the sweetest grandmother ever. I asked to spend the night when I was 6 and slept in her bed with quilts up to my neck. I asked if she had a nightlight, and she didn't but put a lamp on her mantle. I woke sometime later, and the lamp was on the floor. She woke when I stirred, and I asked if she'd moved it. She whispered, 'No.' Then held me in her arms. I later learned why she'd never asked any of us to sleep there.
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Date: 11/16/2024 2:04:00 AM
Fascinating read Paul. It's always interesting what the brain stores and how vividly some things remain.
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