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The Phantom

A ride through gritted teeth, Gums livid, To alleys of hell emotion soar in the black chest. A single Bell and terror wich runs slow. The cause way infested with worms of fear, and the right grip of the black rose from the balcony. Only witness the slow descent on soft organ notes, into the arms of the ghost

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 12/10/2015 4:35:00 PM
Hi, James, WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 12/3/2015 9:50:00 AM
Lovely write, well the sound of the ghost was awesome. James, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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