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THE PERSON I WANT TO BE

With the person I want to be who is blest indeed My life always basks in the Almighty's peace, divinely freed. Gratefully worshipful because of God and His grace My spirit always looks forward to triumph along life’s race. Jubilant verily with constant heavenly presence My soul always wants to radiate serenity’s iridescence. Forgiven from flaws and iniquities of carnal blight My countenance of strong faith always strives to glow along heavenly light. Despite turmoil in entrusted ministry My commitment always clings to supreme victory. Seeking the Master first and His righteousness My heart always desire to esteem Him with earnestness. Directed to reach-out against selfishness-route My steps always persists for service march forward without doubt. Led by the Creator for glorious fellowship My love is always secured within His offered partnership. Finally, excited to walk streets of gold throughout eternity My glorified person praises the King of kings in exaltation's majesty.*
*1Chronicles 29:11 Thine, O Lord is the greatness, and the power, and the glory, and the victory, and the majesty: for all that is in the heaven and in the earth is thine; thine is the kingdom, O Lord, and thou art exalted as head above all. September 14, 2024 3rd place, "The person I used to be or want to be" Poetry Writing Contest Sponsored by Silent One; judged on 10/12/2024

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Date: 10/17/2024 9:37:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. Another wonderful write from you. I always enjoyed reading your work. Have a wonderful day/weekend writing away.....................
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Date: 10/12/2024 5:48:00 AM
I can see your faith is very important to the person you have become.. Congratulations for your placement in the contest..
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Date: 9/14/2024 5:43:00 AM
Ah, okay I get a mixed since of now effects eternity, and this is you in heaven. That said I do have a question about one of your lines. "My live is secured within His offered partnership." Should your LIVE instead be LIFE in that line? Is this for the contest? IF so good luck.
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Beata Agustin
Date: 9/14/2024 6:00:00 AM
Good day in the Lord, Miranda... Thanks for the correction... It's actually "My love is secured within His offered partnership." Thanks again... God bless you.

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