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Emptying your heart of sad emotions shelters you from experiencing norms. For hiding behind your protective walls, you feel impervious to sudden storms. But betrayal cuts with a rusty edge, dulling your appetite to chase rainbows. And you trade a kaleidoscope of hopes for depression's achromatic shadows. The truth invariably outlasts lies, indomitable as the sands of time. And pools of bitter tears often gather as sadness fuels anxiety's climb. Abandoned dreams get set adrift in time, losing sight of their initial heading. For it is scary when you're all alone and you can't stop the panic from spreading. Your heart, wounded by the perils of love, you cry upon the shoulder of a friend. And derive some solace in the knowledge that sometimes, relationships simply end. (Quatrain) 5/3/2017

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Date: 5/23/2018 10:31:00 PM
Love these line "dulling your appetite to chase rainbows. And you trade a kaleidoscope of hopes". Well done, Emile.
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Date: 5/24/2018 6:56:00 AM
Thanks Line, I appreciate your comments and support my friend, Emile.
Date: 5/3/2017 9:00:00 PM
Touching write Emile... Beautifully expressed the emotions... I loved it... Thanks for sharing this marvellous piece... A big 7...
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Date: 5/4/2017 10:05:00 AM
Thanks so much Supraja, I appreciate your comments and support, Emile.
Date: 5/3/2017 5:40:00 PM
Lots of feeling in this one, Emile. You are truly a sensitive and caring poet. Very well done.
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Date: 5/4/2017 10:05:00 AM
Thank you Andrea, your friendly words have touched my heart my friend, Emile.
Date: 5/3/2017 3:44:00 PM
A 7 for this skillfully-written, moving poem, Emile! Especially great lines-- 5 and 12! Janice
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Emile Pinet
Date: 5/4/2017 10:03:00 AM
Thanks Janice, I appreciate your comments and support, Emile.
Date: 5/3/2017 1:11:00 PM
You have done so well writing about this situation Emile. You have such insight and your writing really reaches the reader. Well done. :)
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Date: 5/3/2017 2:14:00 PM
Thanks so much Heidi, your comments have touched me, Emile.
Date: 5/3/2017 12:09:00 PM
Good Afternoon Emile. What expression and what humanity. This entry has worth and merit. Truth always outweighs. Be proud of your words and execution. Well done entirely.
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Emile Pinet
Date: 5/3/2017 2:13:00 PM
Thank you Lisa, I truly appreciate your comments and support, Emile.
Date: 5/3/2017 11:52:00 AM
You really have a way of expression. Sometimes we're so betrayed, but too naiive to know it.
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Date: 5/3/2017 2:12:00 PM
Thanks so much Sunlite, I appreciate your comments and support, Emile.
Date: 5/3/2017 11:39:00 AM
Just as we fall in love, we can fall out of love! A fantastic write, Emile! Thoroughly enjoyed it
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Emile Pinet
Date: 5/3/2017 2:11:00 PM
Thanks White Wolf, I appreciate your comments and support, Emile.

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