The Perils of Love

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Emptying your heart of sad emotions shelters you from experiencing norms. And hiding behind your protective walls; you feel impervious to sudden storms. But betrayal cuts with a rusty edge; dulling your appetite to chase rainbows. And you trade a kaleidoscope of hopes; for Depression's achromatic shadows. The truth invariably outlasts lies; indomitable as the sands of time. And pools of bitter tears often gather; as sadness fuels anxiety's climb. Abandoned dreams get set adrift in time, losing sight of their initial heading. For it is scary when you're all alone; and cannot stop the panic from spreading. Your heart, wounded by the perils of love; you cry upon the shoulder of a friend. And derive some solace in the knowledge that sometimes, relationships simply end.

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Date: 5/23/2018 10:31:00 PM
Love these line "dulling your appetite to chase rainbows. And you trade a kaleidoscope of hopes". Well done, Emile.
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Date: 5/24/2018 6:56:00 AM
Thanks Line, I appreciate your comments and support my friend, Emile.
Date: 5/3/2017 9:00:00 PM
Touching write Emile... Beautifully expressed the emotions... I loved it... Thanks for sharing this marvellous piece... A big 7...
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Date: 5/4/2017 10:05:00 AM
Thanks so much Supraja, I appreciate your comments and support, Emile.
Date: 5/3/2017 5:40:00 PM
Lots of feeling in this one, Emile. You are truly a sensitive and caring poet. Very well done.
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Date: 5/4/2017 10:05:00 AM
Thank you Andrea, your friendly words have touched my heart my friend, Emile.
Date: 5/3/2017 3:44:00 PM
A 7 for this skillfully-written, moving poem, Emile! Especially great lines-- 5 and 12! Janice
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Date: 5/4/2017 10:03:00 AM
Thanks Janice, I appreciate your comments and support, Emile.
Date: 5/3/2017 1:11:00 PM
You have done so well writing about this situation Emile. You have such insight and your writing really reaches the reader. Well done. :)
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Date: 5/3/2017 2:14:00 PM
Thanks so much Heidi, your comments have touched me, Emile.
Date: 5/3/2017 12:09:00 PM
Good Afternoon Emile. What expression and what humanity. This entry has worth and merit. Truth always outweighs. Be proud of your words and execution. Well done entirely.
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Emile Pinet
Date: 5/3/2017 2:13:00 PM
Thank you Lisa, I truly appreciate your comments and support, Emile.
Date: 5/3/2017 11:52:00 AM
You really have a way of expression. Sometimes we're so betrayed, but too naiive to know it.
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Date: 5/3/2017 2:12:00 PM
Thanks so much Sunlite, I appreciate your comments and support, Emile.
Date: 5/3/2017 11:39:00 AM
Just as we fall in love, we can fall out of love! A fantastic write, Emile! Thoroughly enjoyed it
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Date: 5/3/2017 2:11:00 PM
Thanks White Wolf, I appreciate your comments and support, Emile.
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