The Perils of Love

Emptying your heart of all emotions makes you impervious to sudden storms. And hiding behind your protective walls shelters you from experiencing norms. But betrayal cuts with a rusty edge; dulling your appetite to chase rainbows. And you trade a kaleidoscope of hopes; for depression's achromatic shadows. The truth invariably outlasts lies: indomitable, as the sands of time. And pools of bitter tears slowly gather, as sadness fuels anxiety's climb. Abandoned dreams get set adrift in time, losing sight of their initial heading. And it is scary, when you're all alone: trying to stop the panic from spreading. The perils of love devastate your heart: while you cry on the shoulder of a friend. Yet, you derive solace in the knowledge that sometimes, relationships simply end.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Gauthier Avatar
May 23, 2018 at 10:31 PM
Love these line "dulling your appetite to chase rainbows. And you trade a kaleidoscope of hopes". Well done, Emile.
Pinet Avatar
May 24, 2018 at 6:56 AM
Thanks Line, I appreciate your comments and support my friend, Emile.
Kannan Avatar
May 3, 2017 at 9:00 PM
Touching write Emile... Beautifully expressed the emotions... I loved it... Thanks for sharing this marvellous piece... A big 7...
Pinet Avatar
May 4, 2017 at 10:05 AM
Thanks so much Supraja, I appreciate your comments and support, Emile.
Dietrich Avatar
May 3, 2017 at 5:40 PM
Lots of feeling in this one, Emile. You are truly a sensitive and caring poet. Very well done.
Pinet Avatar
May 4, 2017 at 10:05 AM
Thank you Andrea, your friendly words have touched my heart my friend, Emile.
Canerdy Avatar
May 3, 2017 at 3:44 PM
A 7 for this skillfully-written, moving poem, Emile! Especially great lines-- 5 and 12! Janice
Pinet Avatar
May 4, 2017 at 10:03 AM
Thanks Janice, I appreciate your comments and support, Emile.
Sands Avatar
May 3, 2017 at 1:11 PM
You have done so well writing about this situation Emile. You have such insight and your writing really reaches the reader. Well done. :)
Pinet Avatar
May 3, 2017 at 2:14 PM
Thanks so much Heidi, your comments have touched me, Emile.
Ricci Avatar
May 3, 2017 at 12:09 PM
Good Afternoon Emile. What expression and what humanity. This entry has worth and merit. Truth always outweighs. Be proud of your words and execution. Well done entirely.
Pinet Avatar
May 3, 2017 at 2:13 PM
Thank you Lisa, I truly appreciate your comments and support, Emile.
Wanter Avatar
May 3, 2017 at 11:52 AM
You really have a way of expression. Sometimes we're so betrayed, but too naiive to know it.
Pinet Avatar
May 3, 2017 at 2:12 PM
Thanks so much Sunlite, I appreciate your comments and support, Emile.
Wolf Avatar
May 3, 2017 at 11:39 AM
Just as we fall in love, we can fall out of love! A fantastic write, Emile! Thoroughly enjoyed it
Pinet Avatar
May 3, 2017 at 2:11 PM
Thanks White Wolf, I appreciate your comments and support, Emile.
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