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The Perfect Snow

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We witnessed our first snow of the year thus far here in New Jersey, where I live. We got about two or three inches last night but with the temperature fast to rise it had melted away by morning. Pretty while it last, but it was a beautiful thing that I didin't have to shovel. :)

It came down slow, it came down heavy It covered up, my Hot Rod Chevy I went to clean off the snow today But what do you know, it melted away

Copyright © | Year Posted 2023


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Brian Sambourne
Date: 3/26/2023 8:59:00 PM
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Hello Charles, I envy your climate - snow with a short life span. Here in the north, there's still snow about courtesy of Canadian cold. An enjoyable write, Charles. Be well. Brian
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Maurice Rigoler
Date: 3/2/2023 12:18:00 PM
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My very fist disgust with snow was when my father appointed me our home's official snowpath remover! / Maurice
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Charles Messina
Date: 3/2/2023 4:39:00 PM
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LOL- hear, hear :)
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 3/1/2023 5:56:00 AM
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We got a dusting of snow from that event here in Maryland. I like it when it comes for a short visit--I agree--perfect...beautiful...
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Victor Buhagiar
Date: 3/1/2023 2:36:00 AM
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Love your tongue-in-the-cheek type of poetry.
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Daniel Turner
Date: 2/28/2023 2:22:00 PM
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I'm with Kim on this one, Charles. You're getting too old to shovel snow. LOL
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/28/2023 12:31:00 PM
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Perfect title! Love the imagery…I can see it, Charles!
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