The Perfect Poem

Sometimes 
you are given the key
to decipher the language
of trees, of rivers, the secret 
liturgy of the earth. 
It is not a language
of words but a kind
of momentary infusion
of feeling, unfiltered,
so pure that it slips through
the coarseness of speech
and arrives as a sudden
insight in the full clarity
of itself.

You try and capture
its reflection or its echo in words,
attempt to coral its presence 
within the confines
of a page but it always
escapes leaving whispers
in its wake or a pang
in a place where something
should be.

There are days 
when you pause and listen
to what murmurs up
from deep within the well 
of yourself, all the poems 
you have written
most of which have been
forgotten or have become
mute or are now no more
than empty shells abandoned
by what was there.

And there are some
that rise up out of the silence
and once more claim
the ear of your soul, convey
a formless magic 
that seems to reside there
just below the words.
There are no perfect poems
just those that have made room
for something beyond
the self to speak.
These are the ones you keep.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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M  Avatar
December 12, 2024 at 12:07 PM
You have such a very unique and special way with words Paul….your poems reach deep into the readers soul and takes it on a wonderful journey always …its like magic haha!! Debx
Willason Avatar
December 14, 2024 at 3:19 AM
Oh chucks ...you make me blush my dear friend...do indeed value your ongoing encourgement Deb. Gives a spring to a sometimes weary pen. Treasured.
Wolf Avatar
December 4, 2024 at 12:11 AM
The 'PP' forms and reforms itself on my lips --- eternally yet to be uttered.
Willason Avatar
December 4, 2024 at 4:31 AM
Now here's the words of a "thinker"...always agile my dear Gershon...thankyou. Paul
Munsell Avatar
December 3, 2024 at 2:08 PM
I like this poem.
Willason Avatar
December 4, 2024 at 4:15 AM
Thankyou Christine for taking the time to read the poem and commenting. Glad you liked it. Regards, Paul
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