The Perfect Man

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Perfect man who does not talk back.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Gilmour Avatar
April 25, 2019 at 8:34 PM
Wow this is amazing Caren, a perfect man indeed, so brilliantly done and I love it! With kindest thoughts Ann xx
Kiser Avatar
April 25, 2019 at 12:05 AM
Oh geez, you've been watching "The Shining" again...now, Johnny...I mean, Caren, don't play with axes!
Krutsinger Avatar
April 25, 2019 at 3:06 PM
Not to worry and I never saw The Shining. My family will not let me look at a scary movie because I do not do well after seeing them.
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