The Perfect Life

In baseball there is an unwritten rule;
Whenever a pitcher is in the process of pitching a perfect game: 
A game in which he has yet to give up a hit, has not walked a batter and no errors have been committed 
His teammates do not talk to him; he does not mention it; and, everyone leaves him totally alone
For fear of jinxing the situation and being the cause of the end to his perfection.

Do not mistake my silence for contempt
Do not mistake my lack of self promotion for disdain 
Do not mistake my isolation for loneliness

It is just that I am in the process of pitching a perfect life

I am in the late innings of my baseball game
I have been fortunate enough not to have been batted about by any opposition
I have not experienced the misfortune of having anyone walk all over me
And my mistakes have not resulted in someone advancing freely to another base
My perfect game is in tact

My only hope is – I have not jinxed that fact by writing this poem.

Batter up.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010


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Date: 3/11/2014 10:23:00 AM
Rosann, CONGRATULATIONS, on having your poem featured on the soup's home page. I'm always enjoying The Soups top picks of the week. Take Care ~SKAT~
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Date: 3/11/2014 12:34:00 PM
SKAT, I am thankful that you stopped by and read my poem today, but I think that your comment was intended for Rosann. I would hate to steal Rosann's comment from her, as I am sure she would appreciate your remarks. I am letting you know just in case you want to go back to Rosann's poem and leave a comment there. Thanks again for viewing my poem. ;-)
Date: 3/10/2014 7:42:00 PM
There is nothing as perfect as baseball and poetry. Beautiful poem. I especially like the T.S. Elliot like repetition of the second stanza.
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Date: 3/10/2014 4:54:00 PM
My lips are sealed, Joe. congrats on the selection. LOve, daver
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Date: 7/14/2010 12:24:00 PM
Kool take on the contest Joe, many congratulations on your win >> James
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Date: 7/13/2010 8:57:00 PM
Congratulations Joe on your poem's success in the competition. Agape, Moses
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Date: 7/13/2010 6:59:00 PM
Congrats Joe on your HM in the Perfect World contest with this magnificent write and special honor for u to so enjoy.. with luv..
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Date: 7/13/2010 4:45:00 PM
Congratulations Joe on placing in my "In My Perfect World Contest" July 13, 2010. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/14/2010 5:36:00 PM
Cute and of course total fantasy....Keep the creative pen flowing..Sara
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Date: 5/14/2010 5:32:00 PM
Oh! I love this comparison !!! And like you...I am superstitious enough I'm almost afraid sometimes, to be happy!! Excellent poem, Joe!! Okay...I see you in the winner's circle! :)
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