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The Perfect Canvas - El

THE PERFECT CANVAS The perfect canvas, the sky. Gazed, viewed by our naked eyes. Naturally painted blue on clear days with added hues. Pink, orange, red at sunlight. Black and gold at studded night. The perfect canvas, the sky. 8/8/21 Submitted for A Brian Strand Your Pick Poetry Brian Strand 7/6/21 Elemental Poetry Charles Messina Used: How Many Syllables

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Sam Kauffman

Date: 8/9/2021 12:09:00 PM

Back with congratulations for your win with this serene, elemental write Marilene! So fun sky gazing - star gazing with you as you paint your "canvas." Blessings and congratulations.

Marilene Evans
Date: 8/9/2021 2:15:00 PM

Thanks so much, Sam. Have not really been writing lately. I'm a voracious reader of crime/mystery novels and I bought four of them and read them all. Just cannot put the books down, needed to read and finish them.

Alexis Y.

Date: 7/31/2021 10:39:00 AM

Wow! Marilene, I don't know-how I missed this. I agree the sky is just beautiful. Congratulations on a well-deserved write. Have a great day:-) Alexis

Marilene Evans
Date: 7/31/2021 11:22:00 AM

Thanks, Alexis. Have a great week-end.

Charles Messina

Date: 7/31/2021 5:15:00 AM

Beautifully written with superb imagery. Very nicely done, Marlene. Congratulations on your win! Charlie

Marilene Evans
Date: 7/31/2021 9:09:00 AM

Thank you for my placement and compliments, Charlie. Have a great week-end.

Christuraj Alex

Date: 7/31/2021 4:33:00 AM

Beautifully Written. Congratulations on your placement!

Marilene Evans
Date: 7/31/2021 9:08:00 AM

Thank you. Have a great day.

Sam Kauffman

Date: 7/7/2021 11:20:00 AM

What a lovely and colorful palette for your canvas in the sky Marilene! This is as gentle as a sunset! Best wishes for the contest. Hope you had a great trip to SLO! Blessings!

Marilene Evans
Date: 7/7/2021 12:33:00 PM

Thanks, Sam. All is quiet now in my front, in my portrait drawing class. Had fun with my daughter touring Paso Robles, Morro Bay, San Luis Obispo and Pismo Beach. My son and his girl friend joined us and then to Santa Maria wine tasting. Drove home and celebrated 4th of July, my fire cracker son turned 41. Have a Blessed Day.