The Pensive Poet

Written: August 4, 2026, for a contest sponsored by Constance La France Quote: "A pensive poet looks around and stays where quiet deepens, accumulating shards of what is felt but never expressed until even sadness finds a tongue." By Poet ************ The dusk leans in, and rests upon the hill, A quiet weight that sinks into my chest. I walk the worn-out path, half-lost, half-still, Letting memories rise at their behest. The sky grows pale and folds into the trees, Its silver fading through the cooling air— I pause, as though the hush were meant to ease, the restless thoughts I never learned to share. A distant light begins to warm the stone, A soft light that moors a wandering mind. I am in the dusk, no longer alone— And feeling the calm that time left behind. My muse may wane, but leaves me all her heart. Silken oracle flame might forge fair art.
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Guptar Avatar
August 13, 2026 at 2:39 AM
Conghratulations dear poet on your first place win in this contest with a lovely sonnet, with flowing rhythm and fitting rhymes and a cool attractive imagery. Particularly love the last two versses which are superb.
Goldsmith Avatar
August 12, 2026 at 2:45 PM
Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your great/wonderful write. Also what a great quote you have here. Love Both... Have a blessed day with your wonderful win...............
La France Avatar
August 12, 2026 at 12:43 PM
Sotto, wonderfully penned, congratulations on your win in my The Pensive Poet contest, I loved your quote and the video was so interesting, well done, a FAV ⭐
Jones Avatar
August 12, 2026 at 10:14 AM
Beautifully written! The opening lines snag my interest and the following lines are engaging! Congratulations dear Sotto!🥰
MITRA Avatar
August 12, 2026 at 8:08 AM
Congratulations, Sir Poet, 🎉 on this beautifully realised sonnet.👏 What distinguishes it for me is how deftly you make dusk an inward landscape—the fading light, cooling air, and warmed stone becoming movements of the psyche. The closing couplet is especially graceful: the waning muse does not diminish; she leaves her “heart” behind as the very substance of art. A finely wrought creation, and richly deserved recognition. In shared wonder,🙌 Mohit Mitra
Hatampa Avatar
August 12, 2026 at 7:48 AM
Great poem Soto. I love the way it breathes.
Andresen Avatar
August 12, 2026 at 4:18 AM
- Hi Las, back with a well-deserved congratulations :) - hugs
George Avatar
August 11, 2026 at 8:55 PM
Lovely sonnet and lovely quote on the pensive poet. The poet releases the weight that sinks into his chest which he turns into fair art. Thus his restless thoughts which he has never shared fwith anyone find an outlet. Enjoyed reading your poem. Congratulations on your first place win 👏
Andresen Avatar
August 8, 2026 at 6:50 AM
- A great quote :) - A thoughtful poem... love the ending line... it's all so beautiful :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - Have a lovely weekend.Las :) - hugs
Dietrich Avatar
August 4, 2026 at 11:09 PM
Very lovely. As a good sonnet should be. Cleverly written. A sure win
Rowe Avatar
August 4, 2026 at 5:49 AM
Wonderfully done! The first two stanzas are so great. If I'm being honest, the third tripped my tongue up a little metrically, but overall -- simply superb.
Smith nee Howarth Avatar
August 4, 2026 at 5:10 AM
My muse may wane, but leaves me all her heart. Silken oracle flame might forge fair art. Beautiful.
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