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The Peacock

Magical feathers spread wide, He dances under the canopy, Blue eyes unwilling to hide, He captivates his audience, Delicate long neck, He sings a tune, Summoning his audience to silence, Elegant feet, Placed gently on the ground, His beauty astounds many.

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Moon Flower

Date: 6/16/2016 11:39:00 AM

That's the way to go! Congrats on your first entry and welcome to Poetry Soup, Lauren. :)

Skat A

Date: 6/15/2016 8:55:00 AM

Great first post, Lauren...skat

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 6/14/2016 4:55:00 PM

Lauren, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 6/14/2016 4:54:00 PM

I'd picture the peacock, to be a female in this poem, I have to admit this is rather lovely. I do love and will give this a high score. LINDA

Lauren Richards
Date: 6/14/2016 5:05:00 PM

Thank you and i am very happy and grateful that you took the time to read my poem. I would also love it if you'd help me grow as a poet and become better as I'm only 14 and haven't been writing poetry for long. Many thanks Lauren