The Peach Orchard

Oh such a spring in sixty-three,
the orchard there for miles they'd see,
light shades of pink that tinged the clouds
on blossoms where the bees would crowd
and dance from tree to tree.
The sun splashed yellow all around,
young lovers kissed outside the town
beneath the copse of trees.

The rumble of a summer storm
disguised the din of truth forlorn
as thousands marched this summer day;
our nation's sons in blue and gray,
like bees of spring they swarmed.
But not for life and not for play,
instead a pyrrhic death ballet -
the worst that man performs.

The orchard where they struck was shattered,
both limb of man and tree were scattered;
the rubble of their hate was strewn
where once a fruit of peace was grown -
blood and life was splattered.
But in these fields a seed was sewn
and grows to bear a truth that's known,
nourishing what matters.

The tears that drip like autumn leaves
shed for the dead and those they freed
are buried by first winter's fall
and mourned by coyote's lonely call,
now joined by mother's pleas.
While there a girl with tattered shawl
sobs for her love lost in the brawl
beneath the copse of trees ...

(One of the many battles fought on day two at Gettysburg)
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Sinha-Roy Avatar
November 27, 2025 at 10:42 PM
Hearty congratulations for your great win in the marathon.
Gauthier Avatar
November 24, 2025 at 5:18 PM
Congrats on your awesome placement in Mark's Marathon ~ great performance !
Watts Avatar
November 23, 2025 at 12:47 PM
Hi Craig Congratulations on your 2nd place in this contest. reading this descriptive, well metered and rhymed poem highlighted the sadness of war and how quickly lives are shattered in every respect. Well done Cheers Christine
Ashley Avatar
November 22, 2025 at 7:11 AM
Dear Craig, it’s a joy to come back to this potent, poignant poem, so representative of your beautiful and soulful poetry. This piece grips the heart and imagination in brutal yet tender ways. Congratulations for your exceptional run and final placement in Mark’s marathon contest. I’m honored to share the podium with you, dear poet. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
Dietrich Avatar
November 21, 2025 at 8:38 PM
Wow I love this. I was thinking maybe a battle in Georgia due to the peach reference. No matter. Outstanding poem and I love that it's a rhyming one. Congrats on your second place podium win
Toney Avatar
November 21, 2025 at 2:30 PM
Craig, congratulations on your winning Second Place overall in my 2025 Poetry Marathon FINAL! Thank you so much for contributing to the success of the contest. The poems of the 37 Qualifiers can be accessed from my current "Finish Line" blog post. Time to take off those running shoes and give those feet a rest!
Cornish Avatar
November 21, 2025 at 4:03 PM
Mark, thanks so very much for your consideration and hard work - it was great entertainment and a challenge -- Have a wonderful Thanksgiving and holidays!!
Ashley Avatar
August 20, 2025 at 12:01 PM
Dear Craig, your poem is impactful, a powerfully poignant piece so artfully done with perfect meter and awesome rhymes. I admire your varied syllable count (lines 5 and 8 of each stanza) that adds interest and also how the bees were depicted in different roles in stanzas 1 and 2. The atmospheric and emotional imagery is exquisite especially in the last stanza; "mourned by coyote's lonely call" and "a girl with tattered shawl" is both breathtaking and heartbreaking. The "peach orchard", a tender backdrop for a brutal battle. How very sad a time it was.. your poem is a fav for me. Congratulations for your success in Mark's contest. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
George Avatar
August 19, 2025 at 9:22 PM
War and battle brutally destroys life and peace. The orchard where bees flitted from flower to flower and where lovers kissed now lies derelict with memories of mutilated bodies and shattered limbs of trees. Powerfully and poignantly delineated. Congratulations on your great win.
Cornish Avatar
August 20, 2025 at 5:58 AM
Thanks so much Valsa
Toney Avatar
August 19, 2025 at 7:38 PM
Craig, your poignant historic narrative succeeds in adding some humanity and hope despite the inhumanity of man. Congratulations on your second-place finish on Mile 8 of my 2025 Poetry Marathon Contest. Keep your running shoes on, because Mile 9 has already started.
Cornish Avatar
August 20, 2025 at 5:57 AM
Once again Mark, I'm honored - thank you!
Valles Avatar
December 22, 2021 at 1:09 PM
Amazing. One of the best poems I have read on this site. Thank you for sharing it.
Daniel Avatar
June 21, 2017 at 11:25 PM
This is an excellent tribute to all those lives lost in that cruel war, Craig, you've described well the loss of nature too:)
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